Found this on my favorite stories list, had almost forgotten about it, I re-read it and I hope that you add chapters in the future even if they are spaced out. I understand that life just carries you away sometimes or writers block invades the creative process :)
Ashes (Chapter 9) - Fri 14 Oct 2011
I like the pumpkin gut fight. It made my day. My birthday is halloween too! *happy dance* Maybe that's why I felt more of a connection with this chapter.
lashon (Chapter 8) - Sun 09 Oct 2011
Mysteries! i love them!! im so excited you decided to continue this story!
Ashes (Chapter 8) - Thu 29 Sep 2011
Yay! You're back! I'm so happy! I really liked this fic.
lashon (Chapter 6) - Sun 19 Jun 2011
very interesting and funny! but i'm kinda confused with the last chapter
lady of the mist (Chapter 6) - Thu 22 Oct 2009
omg! I'm so confused! why is Kagome Human now and why can't see remember her ghost live, but at the same time she does? Where are you going with this!?
Anyway, besides that, I love your story.
I had seen this story on the list for some time, and I always meant to read it, but couldn't until now... why did I stall so long? Wonderful piece, and the details you shared about a ghost's weight and all the memories... really delved deep into the supernatural to do this piece. Great work, I look forward to reading more!
OMG! I love your story. It's different than anything I've ever read and it keeps me really wanting more. I especially loved chapter 6 because it could confuse you if you don't throughly read it, but thanks to my english classes I analyze everything I read so I think I get what happened. I'm not 100% sure, but I have a good idea. Can't wait unitl the next chapter.
sunset in love (Chapter 6) - Wed 21 Oct 2009
what happened?... oh my, is kagome actually separated into two being? one as an entity and another as living breathing woman? and there's a curse that every time during full moon her spirit would merged?... oh, please update soon...
Ameire (Chapter 6) - Wed 21 Oct 2009
And the plot thickens.....
i'm confused... can ye update soon?
katie (Chapter 6) - Tue 20 Oct 2009
wow i like it please keep going u are doing a great job keep up the good work and dont give up
Adriana (Chapter 6) - Tue 20 Oct 2009
So Kagome becomes "real" on nights of the new moon? Who's "life" did she "take" to become "real"? and what happened to her when she touched the door nob? update soon!!! PLEASE???!?!?
| Very nice, i liked it enjoyable well written hope that you update....:D
katie (Chapter 5) - Sat 25 Jul 2009
| wow i like it please keep going u are doing a great job keep up the good work
Dani (Chapter 5) - Fri 24 Jul 2009
| This is such a great story. I have never read anything like this one before. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out. And YAY for not having all kinds of retarded grammatical errors.
| I was absolutely thrilled that you decided to continue tis fic...I LOVE it so much! Please , update soon and let me know if the doc was the killer??
2lazy2login (Chapter 5) - Fri 24 Jul 2009
| hmmm, I wonder what happens on the new moon... *^_^* PPLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!!!!!!!
BluMystique (Chapter 1) - Fri 24 Jul 2009
| Hello there. I stumbled across your story today and I'm loving it. I only have one criticism. In your first chapter, you state that Kagome a mulatto mixed of Native America, African-American, and Japanese, with blue eyes. Logistically and genetically that would be impossible unless her character has more than one European/white person in her genetic makeup. Or she has ocular albinoism, or it's a genetic mutation that's usually a sign of prevalence for blindness. So I think you might want to add that her mix-up as well. I know it's a small thing but I'm pretty huge on genetics and things like that just stand out to me.
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