wonderfully done the song flowed very smoothly throughout the story it was so sad thanks for writing
That was such a good song fic but it made me cry ;-; I should have known from the warning and the song (which is a song I love). Very good job though, loved it.
This is an interesting first chappie... I've actually never read a fic where Sess doesn't end up w/ Kags until now. I look forward to see how things unfold for everyone. Will you write about how Kagome ends up w/ Bankotsu? Keep up the good work and update soon. :P
| Awh, I knew that prompt would be sad. Thanks so much for writting it! It came out super great. Well worth the wait. :D
marqusiha (Chapter 1) - Sun 08 Mar 2009
| so so so sad but i luv luv luv it
Vou is in tears . And it that is something that is extremely hard to do. But, alas, it was beautiful. And it also probably doesn't help that the song 'Gotta be Somebody' by Nickelback started playing which did go in the way that Sesshomaru was feeling about Kagome. Ohmigawd, I love this. <3
| Destiny dear, you are killing this MissTeak with the raw pain that your words radiate! It's so dreadfully painful, and I actually felt this horrible, weird, clenching feeling in my heart when I read the last few lines, you know, the part where his tears fell. It is so painful and agonizing, but of course, it just goes on to prove your excellent writing skills. I knew this was most probably very childish of me, but I was praying and praying the entire time after reading the wedding part for a miracle to come. But alas, it didn't, and I cried along with Sesshoumaru. Anyway, well done, dear! It was certainly well-written and captivating. Any intention to follow up on this story?:)
Nicely done. Almost made me cry... I'm glad that you put that warning at the beginning, so I was prepared.
| I don't usually care too much for song fics. In fact a lot of times I end up skipping the song lyrics and just reading the story, but you really managed to pick a song that fit perfectly into this fic. It was really good....and sad.
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