I heard when your mate dies you will die too... so sad, but I liked it in the end

Thank you for writing this.  Not many fanfic authors tackle the probably reality that Kagome will grow old and die.  This was a very touching story.

I think you did incredibly well considering English is not your first language. (I envy you multi-lingual folk!) The ending was incredibly sad, and I also have the same fascination with the outcome that Sesshomaru and Kagome being together would not render her immortal. I think about that a lot in my stories as well. I like the fact that she stays mortal and he loves her all the same. Well done!

you have me in tears and tis abotu the saddest and most beautiful thing i've read in a while. wonderful story! - r0o

The story was amazing, i began crying towards the end. You did an awesome job and I loved it--especially since i giggled about the forty children and his tease about how they could have had more--but it was sweet, and touched my hopeless romantic heart. <333

That was an excellent story. You should consider doing a chapter story with a focus on the lives of the children that Kagome and Sesshoumaru left behind. It would make for very entertaining reading considering that their are forty mini Kagome and Sesshoumaru personalities out there. Youkai society will never be dull when in the Western stronghold :)

That was very sweet.  It made me cry at the end... but I must say one thing:

GAH!  Forty children?!