Short but AWESOME!  This is the way I would have pictured the two if they had gotten together.  Great job!

Wahhhhh, Skillet, I love Skillet, SkilletSkilletSkillet!

*ahem*

Anyway.

This was very good, very well written:) The song worked well with the emotions you portrayed and I could practically feel Kagome's pain. Well done, my friend, well done:)

~Siki

That was an awesome story, and it is amazing how complete it is for a short story.  I loved it!  Great writing.