ah! what did he do! what did she do! the suspence! the agony! why! this story got me to thinking about my life and all i gone throught and to tell the truth thats alot with only 15 years of living. i hope he sees her soon
Interesting and well written but leaves me wildly curious.
i like it but am kinda confused on .....well most of it
I love this piece but I just don't understand what did he do to her that he can't forgive himself for? Did he kill her, break her heart send her back through the well and destory it? What? I think you need a second part maybe where she finally can give him the absoulution he needs.
LadySafire
This was very touching. I really like it. A lot :) I enjoy a slightly mellowed Sesshomaru. Thanks for writing this and sharing it with everyone!
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