Hello, my friend! Long time no see... I took this time to re read and enjoy the fic as an almost completed fic. I must say the Buyo had a very interesting role in this fic, even if it was his pee that gave them their answer to their dilemma. Quite funny really. Good to have you back. Hope life is treating you well. Gentle hugs, affectionately, JEN
Nice to read it all at one go! I do love the Buyo pov--he manages to have a cat's laziness and curiosity and LOL the questions about urination make sense now :) I especially enjoyed his mention of Inuyasha. Very much looking forward to the conclusion. I'm sure the story will come full circle and the mystery tidied up nicely.
EP! another well crafted, intriguing chapter before the end. It's so nice to see you again! have truly missed you!. Hope RL is going well!
kedala (Chapter 6) - Sun 12 Jul 2009
Amazing.
Though, I had to reread the previous chapters in one sitting so that this finally begin to come together for me.
I certainly get it now.
And the writing is wonderful.
I love your characterization of Buyo.
I'm sure there is more excitement to come.
K
rowdysgirl (Chapter 6) - Sun 12 Jul 2009
Well, I've read it all in one go, up to this point. Very original, very clever. One error sticks in my head, I think you meant ruse, as trick, stratagem where you used rouse, which means to awaken, incite, to cause. And I'm not even sure which chapter you used it in. What I like about this is you're making us think, try to figure out what you are up to, where you are going with this story. By the way, I loved that he's allergic to chocolate. The whole byplay where she took care of him was quite funny. But now I have pictures in my head that won't go away. It's a great story and I am enjoying immensely.
wolfye p. (Chapter 5) - Thu 16 Apr 2009
oh man, classic line at the end! love love love it!
Ok...sooo not expecting the breath mint thing! I quite literally choked myself laughing. You are truly my awesome one. I'm anticipating the story unfolding. Love it lady!
Buyo to the rescue! Good kitty! I think I'm finally getting the gist of this fic, though my whole thought process in the beginning was that it wasn't an actual fic but a theme of meetings. hmmm, it matters not. As long as you write, I will enjoy reading. JEN
Possessed (Chapter 4) - Tue 31 Mar 2009
This was delicious! Buyo and I both thank-you!
LOL... a vivisection on her larynx... And how has he not done one on Jaken? You write this well, as always!
A lovely chapter as to be expected from you. Am certainly joyful to see you again. You have been missed.
Hello my love! It's been quite a while. This is going to unravel into a lovely little piece, I can tell! I miss AoT, but just knowing that you are still writing brings light to my otherwise dismal day. Hope to hear from you soon!
I happened over this on FF.net the other day, Dokuga having it's server problems.. I'm still and always will be Tana-san(here they wouldn't allow the - for some reason. I rather like the idea of having regular meetings with our beloved couple. Romance is not a requirement. It can always lead to that though. Do you think there will be a specific reason for their meetings? No matter, I am just perfectly happy just having YOU write anything for my enjoyment. Hugs, JEN
As per usual with your stories, anticipating the next chapter. You are truly my wordy genius.
Bell (Chapter 2) - Sun 15 Mar 2009
I just love your writings! Can't wait to see what you have next... Great Job
As always dear Lady, you writing keeps me spellbound and coming back for more.
Hugs,
LadySafire
Tana_san (Chapter 1) - Fri 27 Feb 2009
Good Morning my friend...I like it. Where it leads is totally up to your muse. Haven't heard from you in awhile. Hope all is well...aside from the bout with the cold medicine. It'll be nice to have you around again. Hugs, JEN
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