The story if I were to rate it would be a 8 out of 10 simply because there were many misspelled words and grammatical errors, also beacuse this story lacked a little bit for me plot wise and just how the story over all proceeded. Even so, it was a cute story.
^^ <3<3<3
Kimmy (Chapter 10) - Wed 01 Apr 2020
Bwahah!!!! You go Kagome! Gawd loved this! Ty!
I enjoyed reading the story!
Ok this is awesome
Holy crap on a cracker that was hot
This was a very good story. Thank you
If Kouga's pup was born over a hundred years later than how was Run still alive to become the pups mate ? She should have been like 12 or so by the time Kagome disappeared. Did Sesshomaru find a way to extend her lifespan?
Amazeing job. I cried so hard when Kagome left him. You did such an amazeing job showing their emotions and everything.
Re-reading this 4 years later and it still makes me cry happy tears. Thank you :)
so... i see this and i think Puppy shock! at the last few lines, kagome's awesome!
Oh youre goood! The decond chapter.was awesome
Sorry i meant you wont get a flame from me
You wrong get a flame from this fan. It s already obvious that I love your stories. The only criticism i can give, is that there were a few grammatical mistakes, but it happens. Keep up your great work
read this sotry on Inuyasha fanfication and just had to favroite it on here to. one of the best.
You are the first author I have ever favorited on here. Love your stories and already read most of them. I remeber reading Letters one time and you leaving a comment on my wall, you're an amazing author!
lara (Chapter 10) - Tue 26 Apr 2011
I enjoyed this story very much but at one point I couldn't stop crying. I'm glad it was a happy ending.I can't read stories that don't have happy endings.It's just to hard for me
lara (Chapter 1) - Tue 26 Apr 2011
I just read the 1st chapter & it said it was supposed to be a 1 shot & then I checked because I really wanted it to go on be longer & I am so thrilled to see there is more that I will review when I've read it all.
I love this
Avy (Chapter 10) - Thu 06 Jan 2011
Great story. A few spelling errors here and there, but I totally enjoyed overall.
Wonderful story!!!!! I loved it and you did a great job writing it.
Sair (Chapter 10) - Thu 30 Sep 2010
oh wow i loved this story!
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