I reviewed on FF.net, but I'll gush here as well! I LOVE your tale! I wish I had your command of the English language and nuance. Keep it coming.
I love it! He is so dignified and proper but in the same instant will not hesitate to rip the head off of anyone who would hurt Kagome. I adore how you describe his personality with the most minute ear twitch or narrowing of the eyes....I can see him perfectlt!
I can see the disgust of being handled by that "PINK thing" Poor Sesshoumaru. Personally I hate Hojo reminds me too much of some males from my schooling days. I could easy see Sess's nose being disturbed too by the library as they are so full of smells.
Thanks again for bringing a smile to my face today with the new chapter.
great story, please update soon
Very well done story. You have tempered Kagome's and Sesshoumaru's personality only enough to show how time has matured them. I can't wait to read more of this, it's like seeing the what would happen after special. The bed scene was kinda cute fluffyness, be funnier if he started acting like a "good" dog in front of other to hide himself, like if her friends came over he'd bark and act all loving to Kagome in front of them.
Excellent job. You have a good handle on the character's personality. I like your explaination of why there are no youkai. Keep up the good work and please update soon:)
After getting used to the site I have to say I found your fic lol well just gotta say great work and love whatt you did with the memories of his past very sad but then it had a great turn out!!! Plz update soon ^_^
-slayer
I loved it, and I can not wait for more. Pleas keep up the good work.
-FangedBeasty
What a wonderful story. I can actually picture the spirits being reduced in power due to our shameful destruction of the world. I love how you have Sesshoumaru holding to his personality as it could be if forced to tolerate the horrid squallor of a pound. Kagome is wonderfully in character without being overdone.
So far the story is flowing smoothly and as a reader I am eager to see what will crop up in the story as you continue this. Thank you for moving this here as I would be most upset if I couldn't find it anymore or worse yet was left hanging by the lose of it completely.
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