Hi, this first chapter is freakin' awesome! Man I so luv it! I had a smile on my face when you had Inuyasha and his older bro in it. Sydney isn't my real name tho. But please, please, please, hurry up with the next chapter soon, very soon.
Ikaru (Chapter 1) - Thu 23 Apr 2009
| ohhh very interesting start...i do hope you continue it soon....you might want to watch your capitalization, but other than that and a few spacing issues it was very well done, i eagerly await what happens next!!
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