visitor (Chapter 1) - Sun 22 Feb 2009
Creepy, but very good. You just have to continue it!! It would make a very good mulit-chapter story.

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Feb 2009
This is good writing, it was mysterious and chilling. There has to be a good story behind the mystery of the estate. You should keep it going. *hugs and smiles*

SEB (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Feb 2009
Well done, wonderfully eerie.

Jill Dozer (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Feb 2009

It's a really good story( Creepy too), you should turn it from a one-shot into a multi-chapter story.

Adria_Li (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Feb 2009

First comment: *shudders* The theme is good, but creepy.  Hmm, what inspired you to write this story, Sesshoumarucrazy-san?  I am curious. ^.^ (It's not Halloween, yet.)

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