OMG!!!!! i have read this story like 5 times now its absolutly amazing!!!! hope u write more like it
Ikaru (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Apr 2009
| this was a really good idea, and pretty well thought out, besides a few spelling mistakes, it was really well done. Be a little more aware of your spelling next time and it will make your work even better, i'll keep an eye out for more of your work in the future :D....later!!
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Fri 10 Apr 2009
| i liked this, there were a few spelling mistakes that made it a little confusing, but the idea was good, the scene with her and sango broke my heart. Wonderful job!
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