Very, very amazing. I enjoyed it very much :] And I really hope to read some more as good as this in the future.
This was delightful, i loved the entire thing and especially the end (plus the hot lemon in the middle).
ME LIKEY ME LIKEY!!! OMG thats was awsome!!! I could almost use this story as reference material for my story if you dont mind. It's like a paranormal story tellers guide to Inu Romance. Those Names were beautiful by the way.
Amy (Chapter 1) - Fri 02 Jul 2010
LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! KEEP WRITING !
jojo61538 (Chapter 1) - Sat 27 Feb 2010
it was a great story keep up the great work ^_^
Kanna37 (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Feb 2010
Damn rOo! I had no idea you wrote this one... hot and heavy, lol!
Amber
Saholia (Chapter 1) - Mon 27 Jul 2009
| rOo!! This is wonderful! It's so realistic and I can so see the series ending like this. Beautiful ending!
| I liked it, I mean, who wouldn't?? It's very well written, but not in and overly taxing way. --> ***** <--Five Stars ^^
I didn't see any errors. I'm so happy at least some fictionist use spellcheck.
I'll be checking for more of your story later. Byes!!
P.S. Maybe you'll look at my challenge?? Thanks.
http://dokuga.com/forum?func=view&catid=6&id=14866#14870
MontiK (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Feb 2009
R0o! I luvs it, I was expecting more gutter but this was even better! I have to say.. I hope the r0o-sama sees fit to gift us with a sequel? *hint hint*
*huggles* MontiK
Malika (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Feb 2009
| Amazing!!! I loved every minute and second of it. Keep writing!!!
I LOVED it. I loved it. I loved it. I loved it I love it. Did I tell you I loved it!! LOL. This was so awesome. Especially loved the part were Sesshomaru mentioned about running from Kagome. He learns well. I really enjoyed this and I would love to see more work like this. It was very original and tasteful. I can't how much I enjoyed this.
| Wow! Amazing story! I absolutly loved it..I can't wait to read more of work soon!
Deebeth89 (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Feb 2009
I really like this but it does have some minor problems. You're using dominate when it should be dominant, X is the dominant partner for example. Also then is time related, you do ? now & then. Than is ratio related, comparing 2 things like he is taller than she is & than is the 1 you should mostly use when writing not then. I hope this helps.
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