Wow this is getting good O: I'd be in a state of shock too DX
Please continue it's an amazing story
| Das ist fantastisch!
I haven't spoken Deutsch in a long time. (I can probably still write that in Deutsch)
When your taught a language you have to keep it up, its not like your 1st which come naturally. When I studied Deutsch, at times I looked at a Englisch word and was stumpted (easy words like: the, at, is etc...). Dont let me rant about learning French... Great language, hard to learn.
enough about me! Love reading this! Love how its progressing, amazingly well thought out! Love your use of diction! Its amazing how its turning out!
Poor Kagome, being used like a sack of potatoes. T.T
Inu Yasha is a jerk, but what do you expect, he's like that in the series as well. Someone should teach the loser fraction -father and son- a lession! Make them pay! BUAHAHAHAH...
I am intruged with how this is playing out! (Repeating ones self... twice... ouch..)
Gut gluck... (umlaut missing)
Maybe I should write the next review in Deutsch... It'll brushen up my forgotten skills... or not... meh. well see.
Dani (Chapter 11) - Sun 17 May 2009
| Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. I want to let you know that I am still in love with this story very much. I wonder how it will be between the two of them since they won't be around the rest of the family.I hope that he makes her sleep in his bed every night and that they always wake up tangled together. Hope to see a new chapter soon! If not I will keep checking until there is a new one.
| I really like the way you are portraying Kagome's character. The time it is taking for her to come out of shock and adjust seems right to me. Keep up the great work.
That's good that Sesshomaru is taking her to Kyoto, she difinitely needs to get out of that house!! Can't wait to see what happens there!
WOW!! It's no secret that I've been hooked on this story since the first chapter. Still, I have to tell you that I think this is shaping up to be one of the classics in Sess/Kag fan fiction! The combination of the unique premise, a kick-ass writer and a terrific beta (gotta give a shout-out to RowdyJaner!) all add up to one fantastic, well-written, eminently readable story. As always, your knack for 'setting the stage' just floors me. The imagery is vivid, believable, and oh-so-realistic. THIS ROCKS!!! :-) ~~Wiccan~~
Katja87 (Chapter 10) - Mon 11 May 2009
| It feels like forever since I've been this hooked on a story. I just read the whole thing in one night and I'm dying for more. I can't possibly imagine what Sesshoumaru has in plan for Kagome, but it seems big. Maybe it has something to do with her priestess power? Anyway, I absolutely love the story and I'm anxiously waiting for more!
| You updated!!! I'm so happy! I love this story and where it is going. I can't wait to see what Sesshomaru wants Kagome for exactly. This story line is so different from the usual things I have read and I am so happy my roommate told me about it!!!
| MLMonty,
Hello. Just wanted to leave you a review for this wonderful story. I just read it all and I have to say I am on the edge of my seat with anticipation. I am dying to know what exactly it is that Sesshoumaru wants Kagome for! I can't figure it out. So far he doesn't seem to want her as a bed mate, though he does notice her beauty, but it's obvious he has grand plans for her. While I love suspense normally, at the moment it's killing me! Any chance for spoilers? I'm not above begging.
Anyways, I really like the plot line you have here. Very original and well thought out. I like the marking aspect. Loved the scene where it happened by the way. Very descriptive and drew me in. The warring of their powers and auras, the clash between them. Very climatic.
I also lOVED the airport scene! While I love Kagome there's just something about the idea of Sesshoumaru being territorial over her and her being forced into submission that really gets me. Why I liked this last chapter as well. While Sesshoumaru's feelings for Kagome haven't evolved very far yet I still loved seeing him getting so angry about her being hurt. I can't wait to see what he's like when he truly comes to care for her.
I also appreciate the length of your chapters, the awesome grammar skills you've got, and not to mention the overall superior substance of your work. Your chapters flow nicely. The character interaction is superb and very believable. Your wording is so descriptive that I can see everything in my head. You've obviously put a lot of time and effort into this story and you should be commended for that.
In closing I'm enjoying the product of your creativity immensely and looking forward to the next update.
Sincerely,
Texanlady
| I see now that Sess' father is going to be trouble. Maybe she is understanding a bit, but I'm eager to know what these "plans" are he has for her.
| I Love this story i wish you would update everyday!!!
That was very unexpected. How can youkai treat humans like that? Will Kagome's earlier questions about cultural differences ever be answered? Will Kagome ever get revenge on Inuyasha and Sango for their part in her humiliation? I wonder if she'll ever be allowed to go back home and never look back? I really feel so sorry for Kagome and all that she's been through. And will she ever find out about her real parents? Will you incorporate the shikon no tama into this fic? Keep up the good work and update soon :P
KAggie (Chapter 9) - Mon 04 May 2009
| Yay! I'm glad that Sesshoumaru finally took some initiative in the manner! At least he cares about her on some level, as little as it may seem at the moment. Well, I can't wait to read more of your story! Keep up the good work! :)
Dani (Chapter 9) - Mon 04 May 2009
| Oh yeah (like the cool-aid man)! This is what I have been waiting for. I knew Sess' dad was going to attack her. I am so glad that he got to them before anything too bad could happen. Now, I think the consequences of this is going to be that she won't have to wear that outfit anymore since Sess won't want anyone but him looking upon her. He probably won't let her out of his sight for more than two seconds. I hope he let's her go to the university. Maybe he is breeding her to become his mate. I would like that very much! Thank you for updating, I always check.
Darn Papa Inu. That ancient pervert. Grr!! I love the line about the ruffles from hell. That was hilarious. I hope Kagome heals after this. Can't wait for what's next.
I'm glad the month is almost up, its bad enough she has to deal with Sesshomaru, but Inuyasha is being an ass, and their father is just damn creepy in this! But i liked that Sesshomaru saved her in time, and i also appreciated your little note at the end. I'm relieved that this isn't a complete dark fic, and that there will be a happy ending in the end!!
Thanks for the update!!
jojo661538 (Chapter 9) - Sun 03 May 2009
| fewh thank gosh i mean although it really didnt matter if it was a dark fic or not i was worried that this was going to have a bunch of tragedies and nothing else though that would not have stopped me cause this is a good story im relived i dont like tragedies either i could take them head on but too much is TOO much hey so is his father naturally like that or was he possed or something what happend to inuyashas mother im not liking sangos attitude shes supposed to have some degree of honor and admit when she was wrong well anyways keep up the great work ^_^
| cant wait for an update i love this story!!!
(Chapter 1) - Fri 01 May 2009
| Hey! I have to say that I really like this story. I relate on one level with Kagome, I'm an exchange student now actually. ^^ The fact that she is a citizen of the country that she is in, therefore having to abide by their laws, is totally true. I'm looking forward with the next chapter. Bon Chance ^_~
Did not see that twist, but i like it!!LOL It adds so many new possibilities to the story! I'm still trying to figure out what Sesshomaru want's with her and now she's property to Lord Genshu and Inuyasha plus Sessh. Aah So messing with my head right now!LOL
You absolutely have my attention with this story! Different, yet interesting!!
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