Scherherazade (Chapter 1) - Thu 25 Mar 2010

Very sexy, but it feels unfinished.  There are so many unanswered questions.  Why did he kidnap her?  How did he mange to chain them both? Can he release them himself or is someone else going to?  Your writing is descriptive and engaging.  I want to know what happens next and why he has done this, and I'm sure you have captured other readers attention the same way, which is fantastic and a testament to your talent.  I think it would be better as either a longer one-shot or add another chapter or two and explain a few things.  Overall well done, I hope you will add to this.

Angelicatt (Chapter 1) - Thu 25 Mar 2010

Super smexy smuttiness...always a fun read. A booboo here and there, but it didn't matter once I realize why she was naked and tied up. That dog is just way to dirty for his own good..amazing details - keep it up.

Hairann (Chapter 1) - Wed 24 Mar 2010

Interesting drabble, thought a bit confusing, but it often happens with drabbles lol.  A few typos here and there, but for the most part, it was a nice little taste of lemony goodness.

Ikaru (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Mar 2010

Alright when I started reading this I was slightly confused as to who would want to capture her and Sesshoumaru, but then it took a wonderfully unexpected turn. I was laughing so hard when I realised that Sesshoumaru had set it up, who knew he had such a kinky side? A wonderfully light, lets not forget smutty :D, read, I loved it, and look foreward to more of your work in the future.

Sessylove219 (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Mar 2010

Oh, love the kinky little snippet. Very well written. Smut for smut's sake is always appreciated. Good job!

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