Lovely story! I didn't expect the betrayal from Rounen at all! I love being surprised in stories, nowadays they're so predictable. I like how Sesshomaru and Kagomes relationship isn't rushed at all. I look forward to reading the next story!
*omq!!!
i thouqht for a second you stopped there. .i was sOoooo seriously qonna say
WWWWWHHHHHAAAAAATTTTTTTTTT?/!!!
but thanks lols. .
sooo addicted with this story. the plot and characyers are just damn. .
the way you depicted kaqome, sess, marzia nd the others are just banq-on. .
JOB well DONE!*
Stuph (Chapter 1) - Wed 24 Feb 2010
It's a prety good story so far, i like it. It reminds me of vimpire knight.
FourShotChild (Chapter 23) - Wed 12 Aug 2009
| Wow. I really like your story. I thought it was complete though?
There is so much more that needs to be said and done! My goodness.
I want to see how Kagome and Sesshomaru's relationship blooms! Does
Kagome get over the fact that she's a vampire?
There was something I didn't quite understand. Why do pure vampires
hate bitten ones? I mean in order for them to exist they have to be
bitten by a pure vampire... The entire vampire race is mostly bitten
vamps, so why?
Any way, keep the story going! I love it and want to read more! Lol.
Good luck!
Azurena (Chapter 23) - Fri 07 Aug 2009
| Oh my gosh. . .your story is amazing. I absolutely LOVE it. I love everything about it! The plot, the characters, the flow, everything! On top of that, I love vampires too so basically your story is perfect in my eyes :) It's wonderful! I read the entire thing in one sitting and I was SO disappointed when it was over. I simply cannot wait until you start the sequel. I have to see what happens! I was on the edge of my seat half the time anyway, so I'm really excited to see what the next story will be like. It was fantastic! Loved it!
Anni (Chapter 1) - Thu 06 Aug 2009
| AHHHHHHHH!!!! I JUST FINISHED READING THIS!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!! I CANT WIAT TO READ THE SEQEUL!
Jenna (Chapter 23) - Mon 03 Aug 2009
| Ohhhhhhhhhh! OMG! I am so excited for the sequels! Have you by any chance read the House of Night series, there are a lot of similarities. Just wondering. I am so ready for the next book though, can't wait. Good luck.
| 30 reviews? thats all? you should have lots lots more! your story is great! ^-^ though i was sad to see that this is only part one Q.Q Now i have to wait for more chapters so get your butt in gear! lol keep up the greaaaaat work!
Adriana (Chapter 21) - Fri 31 Jul 2009
| I liked this chapter. I think it was fitting for them to react to what Kagome was doing, like that. :)
update that last chapter!!!! Please!!???!
| Cool story!! can't wait to see Kagome as a vampire, keep up the good work:)
kagomeme (Chapter 1) - Fri 31 Jul 2009
| Ok Im really geting fustrated not about you but ofd course The way I have to submit this review. Your work is excellent..The time and research you put into this fanfiction is deffinately(sp?) evident. I've been reading fanfiction since I was about 10...Im 18 now(YaY)...But I have to say this is deffinately one of the fanfictions I will remember!! Um question is kikyo ever going to show up??? And have you ever posted on a single spark?
youkaihime (Chapter 20) - Thu 30 Jul 2009
| Great chapter! I'm happy that Miroku and Rin re-appeared. I really liked how you are portraying Sesshoumaru in this story, I love how he is starting to doubt his decision in turning Kagome. It makes him seem more human haha
I'm so pumped that you are doing a second and third book. Keep up the good work ^_^
KAGOME (Chapter 20) - Thu 30 Jul 2009
| THIS FIC BOILS MY BLOOD SOOO MUCH I LUV IT!!!!
HEH...NO PUN INTENDED
KAggie (Chapter 19) - Sat 25 Jul 2009
| I strike again! :D
I'm glad that Sesshoumaru is finally gaining some depth with his emotions! He saved Kagome's life for crap sake! Also, I'm really interested on how the rest of the vampire court will react to his decision, like punishment, etc. And most definitely how Kagome will take the news. She's got a lot on her plate!
Lilium (Chapter 19) - Sat 25 Jul 2009
| Yay!! Another chapter, and so quick!^ ^.Thank You!!<3.I'm happy to hear my comments make you happy. I can imagine how good you feel, like you're high or something, lol. Can't wait to read what happens next!!~~Loving ittt~~ (:
Lena (Chapter 19) - Sat 25 Jul 2009
| Man I love this story, i can never wait for the next chapter to be posted. Keep up the great work and update soon... The story line is great though I love were this story is going.
Danelle (Chapter 19) - Sat 25 Jul 2009
| U have great talent...i absolutly am addicted to this story...dnt get discourage ur an excellent writer...plz continue when u can...
Danelle
| Wow, so Kagome's a vampire now. This chapter is SO good! I can't wait to see what happens next! And, I'm really glad to hear that my comments bring you such joy!
| Wow!
i didn' see it coming! kagome transformed in vampire!
I can't wait to see what will happen next! Her reaction when she will wake up and of course how she will be able to extract vengance on kagura, naraku and her traitor of chef!
please, please, update soon!!!!
Katty (Chapter 19) - Sat 25 Jul 2009
| This story is soo wonderful. I wish you could get more comments, but alas, sometimes the most deserving of works do not receive the necessary praise. I absolutely love the time and effort you put into the characterization of each of the characters, whether they are the most insignificant of character to the most significant *sess and kag*. Well I'm hoping you finish this story, because I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Please shout me out!!
Awesome work btw!!!
*Katpat :)
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