The whole plot was really creative and i loved that... The only critic i have is that the whole 'kags doesn't use a condom with strangers' was a big NOPE for me. I know this is only a story but i couldn't help but think about the diseases they could be getting from this
Wow I"m impressed i've been in the scene for a while and to read a fan fic about kink is absolutly amazing. your writing style and the way you have everything is perfect so true to the scene. I love how you write kink.
Penelope
| Wow... I had to read the first few chapters because I wanted to know what was going on. I liked this. Bob... I had to laugh at this... I mean I know with the challenge and expected it but the reaction with Kagome was funny. Great job! I must admit the idea that Kagome is the dominating partner is different... but I like it!
xcc (Chapter 1) - Mon 30 Mar 2009
Sizzling erotic sadomasochism at its finest. Brillant written, your great! Thanks so much for sharing this.
| -cough- Well, that was... different. But strangely, hot. XD
Kirai (Chapter 2) - Mon 30 Mar 2009
| WHOO!! Boy was that hot. Loved it. Dom's rock.
LC Rose (Chapter 1) - Wed 18 Feb 2009
| Wow that was interesting! I have to say I never pictured Sesshoumaru enjoying something like that, but hell. Whatever floats your boat! :-) Of course, sometimes the quiet ones are the hardest to read, too...
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