Reviews for Shifting Nature by Bella

lara (Chapter 8) - Thu 23 Dec 2010

 

I had to reread this story I really like it . I can't wait to see what will happen next & when are you going to get more into the other people in the pack & their personalities,relationships,pasts, powers & etc. I also want to see more of what goes on between Sessh & Kagome,what is their relationship like? how did they meet?  after she got her memories back  you mentioned that when she was a kid there was a kid like Sessh or was it Sessh, you didn't tell us & when he wanted to talk to her about her memories she didn't want to discuss it all she said is the man who killed her mom would die painfully. If they are in a love relationship, why wouldn't she want to talk to him about the memories she regained??? I know he can read her mind but still she should be talking to him about alot of things if she is brand new to all these changes around her & with just getting memories back from her childhood,that he may or may not have been a part of, I doubt I'm the only person who is curious to hear some Q & A between them. In the 8 chapters you've given us the story sounds very interesting but there are alot of gaps,it's like it's been a month since she's gone through the change & been with the pack & I'm filled with questions  that I would have thought she'd have grabbed Sessh & demanded to be told like....how  did they know she was the one from the prophecy & what is the prophecy ??? How come as soon as some  in the pack met her they told her she was powerful like they could sense or feel her power ??? her power over the elements seems really intense & she made a storm with dark clouds,rain,lightning bolts ,strong winds & she can lift,hold in the air & throw entire trees,boulders & other earthy stuff that is really heavy. Imagine what she can do near an ocean???? what does Sessh (& the rest of the pack ) think about her powers,especially after the storm she made====================================================================== I look forward to more of this story


lara (Chapter 8) - Sat 18 Dec 2010

PLease contiue this story. It's unique & I would really love to see what happens next. I  just wrote out this really long review asking if you finished this story on a different site & if you did how do I go about finding & reading it. I also asked questions about Kagome & Sesh & if you were going to more into about them & if they end up together & about her firends. If they really are as old as they say then what part of memory is real & what isn't ??If she is just 18 & he's 150 how do they know who she is & how did they find her? If they can only shapeshift into 1 creature then why can she turn into many & what does it have to do with being 1/2 human?? also if elders could change into many creatures ,as she can, then what does that have to do with her? If they are as old as they say then how long have they been a pack & if they knew this about her & had really been living these other lives that she knew nothing about, then what did she really know about them that was true? were they really ever her friends if everything she knew about them wasn't true? I mean Kagome is just finding out that everything she's ever known about herself,who she is,what she is,her family & friends isn't true?? what about her brothers ??? What does it mean to be an alpha female ??? 

If I was Kagome I would be in shock about everything & suddenly feel out of place & completely alone thinking about getting answers & then decide if she'd be better off alone absorbing it all,figure out where she belonged. If her family ,her friends & her boyfriend were not really who &/or what she thought they were, it was like she was just really meeting all of them now. If Sessh is the alpha male/pack leader & the person she'd believed to be her long time boyfriend (which would appear to be untrue if all her friends & family were all fake),given her complete trust to & run away with him at the drop of a hat.....then been hit with all this,shocked,confused & now unsure who or what is real,feeling so alone, since it was Sessh whom she allowed to basically lead her to this point & since he is the alpha male  &  the person in whose trust she believed in that brought her here.If I was Kagome I would make Sessh answer all her questions, tell her the truth about what he knows & about her. Also she needs him to tell her what their real relationship is/was & what was part of a false memory. When he brought her to meet the rest of the pack, unsure of what to say while trying to bond & make conversation with 1 or 2 of the others she felt humiliated, she'd thought Sessh & she had been in a fairly long monogamous relationship as boyfriend & girlfriend,yet when she mentioned Sessh was her boyfriend to these others in the pack they seemed honestly surprised to hear that Sessh was her boyfriend. Aside from this being a reminder that she had been living a lie & all the relationships she'd had with friends & family were fake. Still along with their reaction to what she said about Sessh & herself were 2 obvious things that she hadn't yet realized...one was that her relationship with Sessh was most likely a lie to ensure for whatever reason that when she changed on her 18th b-day she'd come with him the 2nd was the sudden pain in the chest that she felt with the 1st realization.

Yes ,if I was Kagome I would ask that as Sessh is the alpha male of the group (& with them talking as if she should be the alpha female of the group) that he answer a lot of questions.

      I really look forward to reading more of this story & hope you continue to write it.

 


Serephina of the Kamis (Chapter 8) - Fri 23 Oct 2009

I seriously love this story. I can't wait for your next update. I like how you make her training seem more realistic and gradual. I also love how Kagome and Sesshoumaru interact. I love stories where Sesshoumaru is protective and loving. OOC, but so much fun. So Thank you for writing this amazingness, and update soon!


natasha (Chapter 8) - Sun 18 Oct 2009

ok so i love the storie, there arent many shapeshifter stories out there and you have so afr made the best one. i hope that you continue this storie until the very end. i also love the fact that you made kagome a wolf and an elemental.

i wish you all the best

Mihara_wolf


katlady (Chapter 6) - Thu 15 Oct 2009

this  has  sone good  porention  did you by chance  have th story posted  some were else?

 


michelle (Chapter 2) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

this is a very great story that i love and like alot since i first started reading it and its really good too. your a very great author who wrote this really great wonderful good story.


WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 8) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

It has definitely been awhile since you last updated but I am glad that you were able to answer some of my questions. And you did not disappoint... Wow! Kagome sorta reminds me of the Avatar... I'm sooo jealous. And when you say it's going to get worse, how much more hell can Kagome possibly be forced to endure? I just don't believe it can get any worse but I bet you will do your best to prove me wrong. Keep up the good work and update soon :P


WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 7) - Sun 13 Sep 2009
Well, I am soo glad that I'm not Kagome right now... Having a snake slither into my bed and all that training she'll have to endure is not something I'd like to happen to me... It all sounds rather painful to me. Although, I have to say, you come up with very creative names and animal counterparts for everyone. I look forward to see how long it'll take Kagome to master everything. Keep up the good work and update soon :p Also, I hope you allow Kagome to give Shippou a nice ass-kicking very soon.

stars (Chapter 7) - Sun 13 Sep 2009
please updata

WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 6) - Wed 09 Sep 2009
This has been a very interesting chappie. I can't wait to find out more about the prophecy and Kagome's backstory. I want to know who her parents are and how everyone ended up in Sesshou's pack. And what special power does Kagome possess? Keep up the good work and update soon :P

Genocide of the unfaithful (Chapter 5) - Tue 01 Sep 2009
y does it keep saying jason?

WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 5) - Mon 31 Aug 2009
This is an interesting idea for a fic. I like how the story is progressing so far. Could you clarify who Jason is... is Jason and Savage the same dog? Could you provide more background info on Kagome like who her real parents are and how she ended up with hunters? I look forward to learning more about these shape shifters. Keep up the good work and update soon. :P

Inkasha Taisho (Chapter 5) - Mon 31 Aug 2009
I enjoy reading this story, but who is Jason!!?? I'm a little confused!!

Ceferadel (Chapter 5) - Mon 31 Aug 2009
awww!!! Kagome must be an ancient one... I really hope she can turn into a dog, because if she stays a bird that would just be hilarious. The ending of this chapter was sweet.

Diane Peter (Chapter 1) - Sun 30 Aug 2009
Well things seem to waffle a lot. At 1 point you say Inu & Sess are twins then best friends, then they're at least related since they share the same last name. The physical descriptions seem to shift too, Inu has brown eyes then gold, black hair then blonde. Also did you copy this from somewhere, a book or something? In several places you have Jason & there is no Jason mentioned before those places, Jason called while she was making dinner asking her to meet him at the park, Jason said he was going to get her out of her parents house before he hung up the phone, Jason in the car after he told Kagome her parents were going to kill her.

Zyren (Chapter 5) - Sun 30 Aug 2009
This story has potential however I would suggest a beta, you have some discrepancies in chapter 2 I believe, i.e. who is Jason? It seems almost like this was another story for something else and you just switched names....just a heads up.

moosegirl13 (Chapter 5) - Sun 30 Aug 2009
Ooh, I'm liking this so far. Totally unique! Keep up the great work. I do, however, have one question: What kind of bird does Kagome change into?

Ceferadel (Chapter 4) - Mon 24 Aug 2009
Wow. This story is incredibly creative. I've seen nothing like it before. Your grammar, spelling, word usage is incredibly good as well. I'm really looking forward to what will happened next and more details on this Alpha pack. Also, I'm hoping Kagomes only shape is not a bird. hah.

Tana_san (Chapter 4) - Sat 22 Aug 2009
This is an interesting concept. I'd like to read more. I'll be looking forward to your next update. JEN

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