the story is really good. tho its a little rushed in certain places. a little more detail would make your story even better. try it out and see what it does. Update soon, i cant wait to read more ^^
sushiko (Chapter 8) - Tue 28 Apr 2009
| wheres the love in this story? it's like sesshoumaru is just taking advantage of her. i thought there would be love. sesshoumaru seems too mean. and kagome looks like she enjoys being used. i guess i'll have to wait for the next chapter or more to see when they'll actually be together as mates.(don't mind me i was just thinking out loud)
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 Feb 2009
Characters are quite a bit OOC so I would be careful of this. Story moves a bit too fast and I'd watch the detail flow a bit, doesn't quite flow from one moment to the next. But these are easy to fix. :)
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