Hmm...didn't really see that coming but I liked it :)
Maru (Chapter 1) - Thu 18 Dec 2008
| that was highly original, and certianly short and sweet. the characters were well in character. Myself, I would have enjoyed some scenery, but to each their own. cute story. Maru
ME (Chapter 1) - Tue 16 Dec 2008
I very much enjoyed this. Cute. Refreshing. Entertaining. In character |D
Awwh! That was so... interesting. I liked it, though. I think I might have to snag Sesshoumaru and make him stargaze with me one of these nights. ;D Thanks for the read!
that was random as coupld possible be, for the pair of them but this single line made me love it, ""Cease your whining, woman, and please your husband.""
hahahahahahahaha
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Dec 2008
Didn't really care for this one, though the grammar and such was well done. Centering the lines it rather annoying to read to me, but that was the only real problem I had with it. Though I think the story would have been better had you picked something else besides hotdogs. I know you were trying to trick people into thinking they were doing some more naughty, and that was going rather well, it was just the hotdogs didn't seem right for the story.
| | | | | | 