Haha cute

I loved all of it. Exspecially the part where Inuyasha opened the broom closet to find Sesshomaru and Kagome naked lol. Thank you for that.

Alright....it has suddenly come to my attention that I have not yet given a review for this. Which is weird...because it's been on my favorite's list for a while. I was sure I'd given you a review, but apparently not. No matter, I shall give you one now. XD

I absolutely LOVED this story! The character's were very in character and I liked the originality of the piece. Also, I liked how you inserted that almost "But Inuyasha" by Kagome somewhere in the middle. I knew it was Sesshoumaru from his earlier "Hn" (well that and this is a Sess/Kag site) but I thought that gave the piece added depth because you knew somehow Inuyasha was linked to this but you didn't know how. I can't say what I thought when I read this the first time, but I assume I caught onto the fact that it was Sesshoumaru then as well. I also loved how you added the surprise of it being their wedding. That was totally unexpected. When I reread it, I remembered that they were at some kind of formal event, but I didn't remember the exact situation. And I'm glad I didn't, as it gave me a laugh. When I read Sesshoumaru's line near the end "What this Sesshoumaru does in, or out, of his pants is his own business," I laughed so hard I drew the attention of the others here in my campus's technology lab. That is definitely going into my quotebook to be enjoyed again.

The piece on a whole was very well written. I thought you gave it just the right tone throughout to keep the reader interested...not only in their *ahem* activities but also in the goings on around them and the circumstances that caused them to go into the closet for this in the first place.There were a few places where I caught some grammar errors but they were few and far between, which is expected. It's logical that one would not be able to catch everything when editing. You can hope that you do, but more than likely unless you get like thirty people to look over it, some things are going to slip past them and make it into the final version. I'm really bad about not being able to catch things myself....guess it's because I know what it should sound like in my head so I just read it how it should be read and not how it's written.

Anyways, I just thought I should give you a review since this piece is very well written and has been on my favorites list for some time now.

SNEAKY!YOU NEVER KNEW THEY WERE GETTING MARRIED!

Very well written and hilarious.  I thought perhaps she was with Inuyasha and cheating on him.  I was a bit disappointed in her at that point.  lol

I'm glad that wasn't the case.