Jade (Chapter 3) - Fri 05 Mar 2021

This is still such an amazing plot and I hope you someday come back to it


Smittee (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 Oct 2010

I remember this! I really like this one! Good job, Monti.


Caitriona (Chapter 1) - Fri 10 Sep 2010

This is a great start to your story.  I hoe that you decide to continue it some day.  I'm really wondering where Kagome came up with the monies to purchase all the youkai over the years and how she keeps the government from knowing that she isn't quite like th rest of them.

 

Thanks for writing for us.


MadMistress65 (Chapter 1) - Sun 20 Sep 2009
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InuLover (Chapter 3) - Sun 13 Sep 2009
This is an awesome fic!! I love the storyling and the insight into the future of the youkai. Humans are such vile creatures! Anyhoo, do you plan on updating or completing this?? I surely hope so. I can't wait to find out what happened to Shippo. Plz, plz, plz update soon. Keep up the great work. Your writing is wonderful.

Alpine (Chapter 3) - Tue 07 Jul 2009
OMG!!! I seriously haven't been this excited to read a fic in a LONG time. I have been reading these for the last 2 years and this story has such a great plot started... Don't keep a fellow Wisconsinite hanin here... Please update soon.. Hugs from Oshkosh ^_^ Alpine

Ikaru (Chapter 3) - Sun 08 Mar 2009

another great job monti!!! poor Koga, i feel really bad for him.....Sess's anger is somewhat justified, but hopefully he'll get over that soon enough...Keep it commin monti, i really wanna see what comes next!!


sweetest angel (Chapter 3) - Sun 08 Mar 2009

i need more...please!!!!!! *crawl towards the author, hand extend*

lol 

good chapter! i can't wait to see what will happen next! why sesshomaru's anger is directed so much on kagome? when will they see each other? will he know soon how much she use the jewel to keep the nightmares away? will he hear about his mother? about the promise?

i really can't wait to see more!

please, update as soon as it is humanly possible for you to!!!!!


Evenstar (Chapter 2) - Wed 25 Feb 2009
Poor Sess. No one deserves this. Well hopefully Kagome can piece him back together.

Fluffy Lady (Chapter 2) - Wed 18 Feb 2009

Monti! That is so mean! </3 I feel so bad for my Sesshomaru!


Ikaru (Chapter 2) - Wed 18 Feb 2009
awww...poor Sess....:(....i feel sorry for him, and touran being denied death a warriors death......ggrrrrr, nasty humans. I like the way your using the names from wolf's rain, another engaging chapter, keep 'em commin :)

Ikaru (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Feb 2009

Lovin it Monti...can't wait to see what comes next!!


hikari hime (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 Jan 2009

Oh my.... where is Shippo?

The suspense is thick. I'm hooked.

Dewa mata


Fluffy Lady (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 Jan 2009

aah! Monti! You must not stop here! D: Poor Inu and Kimi... so sad.  Those kids better be alright! Otherwise...


Zack (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 Jan 2009

Very Intense Imagery and Vivd word Choice. Great Story so far. Cant believe you killed Inuyasha already :P Not Complaining though, Cant Wait to read more of this one.


taixi (Chapter 1) - Wed 14 Jan 2009

A compelling start. Can't wait to find out who's behind all of this!


Nykitty (Chapter 1) - Wed 14 Jan 2009
O.O WOW it is really really good! I was on the edge of my bed scrolling down like a mad woman. You set the framework for a really great story, I can already see it will be unlike any of it's predecessors. It is safe to say I am hooked. Which is great! This will be the first story I have followed from the beginning( I usually don't because the suspense kills me) but I don't think i can help it in this case ^.^ Great job can't wait to the next chapter and I will be more then happy to help if you ever need some. ( Looks like i got first review! Cool XD ) Nykitty

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