Sesshoumaru knows, i feel it.... it makes sense to me.... the phrase fits his 'tone' too...
and when i turn out completly wrong, i'll slap myself :3
~zen
UPDATE SOON, PLEASE!
This story is a-m-a-z-i-n-g!
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Yay! Another wonderful chapter!
Hmmmm.... the flot plickens... I wonder if she still can sense the Shikon shards. Would she have to train her powers again, or find some sort of way to strengthen them? Without them, I can't imagine how she would locate the shard. And who could have it? Hasu? How many people were aware of his existence in the first place? Is she going to tell Sesshomaru about it, and about her identity, so that he could help her?
Argh... so many questions. Of course, I know I'll get my answers within the story. I look forward to it. ^_^
Thank you for sharing XD
Dewa mata
Excellent chapter. I do and don't feel bad for Hasu, and I loved that your writing made me think that way :-) I can't wait to see more Sess/Kag action, but the story you have developed is amazing!
That went as expected. As much as Hasu obsesses over Sesshoumaru, she cannot control his choice. She has been unable to face facts long ago. The woman is now being eaten alive by bitterness and hatred. I do not feel sorry for her. Early in the story, yes.
As for the missing jewel shard, I am puzzled as to where it could be. Would these people know what it is? What has happened to her priestess powers that she could not keep one shard untainted?
Oh God. How can you leave us hanging like that? The suspense might kill me. ^_~
Do I like Hasu? No...
But I find myself in Kagome's situation in real life. I've known someone for a while, and theres another female that thinks that the one I fell for belongs to her. I felt bad for this chick until she started whoring up to him in a pathetic attempt to gain his favor. I guess this would be something to think about in that situation, and I'm not sure of you've written any more, but here are some possible ideas:
Hurting the other female works, but it angers the man. Getting the man's attention, however, gets the other woman hurt AND gets what you want.
What will Kagome do now? How long has it been since she last held the shikon shard? I wonder if Hasu took it? Please update soon... :P
finaly an update about time......but I have a sneaky idea of who might have took the shard but I will leave my guess for latter update soon please
Great job on your characterization of Kagome in this chapter! It would be just like her to worry about the hurt feeling of the stupid cow that just slapped her. Personally, I can't stand Hasu... but that's just me (well, maybe not). Hmmm, I wonder who stole the jewel shard!
I am so glad I read your other fic "let's fall in love" I belive is the title...I thought that one was great too but this one is more my type of fic. I love the way you describe the scenes and emotions the characters are going through, it's almost like a movie is playing in my head. Please update soon, I absolutely love your fic. :D
Ooh, now I'm anxiously waiting for when Sesshoumaru finds out her real identity. I hope it isn't too horrible, especially since she's just accepted him. And Hasu will have no doubt returned by then, so I don't envy Kagome, who will no doubt be besieged on both sides by Sess and Hasu. Another beautiful chapter. :D I squealed at the painting, it was so sweet. &the lemonade is really up to you. It won't take away from the story not to have it, but if you do add citrus I'd love to see how you work it in. :3
Hello there~
I have a confession to make. I...fell in love with your story! I think the flow is very smooth and the choice of words is beautiful!
To answer your question from the latest chapter, I don't think lemon is necessary but it's not unwelcomed either. :) The Wisteria is sweet enough to make people continue reading even without the lemon part!
But there's one little isty bitsy tiny flaw. I think Sesshoumaru-sama is a little OOC here. Maybe it's just me not used to a fluffy and sweet Sesshoumaru... lol...
Keep up the good work! I want to read more of The Wisteria... So, I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapters!
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