I already discovered this on FFN some time ago and fell in love with it. I constantly checked every so often for updates and was ready to give up when I saw it here. I can't wait for you to finally finish with the FFN chap 6 for fresh updates. I say FFN chap since here you plan to break the 6 chapters into smaller ones unless I misunderstood.

I love it still I cant wait for more.

Yay! More action in this one! The suspense is thick...

To find a beta reader, you can go to the dokuga forum. there is a category to which you can post your request ;)

I'd tell you I could help... if I wasn't hopeless in the language area. I have my own betas and they do help a lot XD

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Ilove this story. congrats on a great job. update as soon as you can please. JaNe

Yep, seems like the begining of a fairly good story. I look forward to read the next installment.

It's a little 'raw' tho, nothing a good little beta or at least a quick edit couldn't fix. Just some capitalisations and a few mistakes, it could be so much more pleasurable to read your fic without them marring the text as a whole...

Anyway, I find your OC interesting and I'm eager to learn more. Please keep on the good job!

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