Ikaru, this was so much fun. Was it ever explained why he didn't call her for 2yrs and why she forgave him so easily and why oh why, would she have a breakdown after they already took their vows on the wedding night?? Jeez, she made a convincing bridezilla for a moment but then Sess went all fluffy and melted the ice in my heart. I so love the Rin and Shippo dance...a couple not fated to marry..indeed. I am not personally a fan of weddings but this one was so worth attending ;)

I can't imagine how weird it is to write a story with many different authors. This was fun to read because I was just at a wedding, commenting to my boyfriend about how neat and polite the bride and groom were when it came to putting cake into each other's mouth. I think this turned out well. Good job.

Very cute, even as a stand alone without the rest of the co-op.  Couple of grammar/puncuation issues, such as making sure you start a sentence with a captial letter.  But nothing a quick edit or trip to a beta couldn't fix :).

That was indeed Sweet Revenge! ~.^ haha not… no one laughs at my jokes…. -___-;;; Anyway, I think I would have been confused had it not been for the recap, so thank you!  The Rin-Shippo dance was adorable!! I love how Shippo says, “I don't wanna marry her either!!” while removing the garter belt.  It was so cuuuuteee!!! 

Just one thing: mutt is spelled with two t’s not one.  ^__^;;; I’m being anal retentive – ignore me.  Other than that, I have nothing for criticism!

ducky out. 

That was cute. And very sweet, indeed. It was well-written. It's too bad the collaboration fell apart. I really thought the Shippo and Rin part was adorable. And that was sweet revenge at the end. It has left me craving cake.

As you pointed out this is a piece of a collaboration, that fell apart.  That being the case it is really hard to give your piece a fair review, even though you gave us a breakdown of what happened to get to this point. Iit's not meant to stand alone and suffers from the lack of the missing chapters.

However, your chapter is well written and I didn't notice any grammar or spelling mistakes, which is very nice.  Sesshoumaru's explanation on why he chose the dress he did was sweet, and if I were Kagome I would have been touched to hear them. I was a little confused by this piece of Sesshoumaru's explanation though, "...and the last because I want us to have many children together." I didn't understand where that tied into the color of the dress he picked.  I'm also very curious about her objection to wearing white.  The part with Shippo and Rin dancing is cute and made me smile.  

Your chapter is enticing enough that I want to get the full story and I wish that the other authors would add their contributions or that your muse would inspire you to do it.