I must admit I read your work three times consecutively! In the same day! So beautifully tragic and dramatic! It made my heart twist painfully! I cried, really cried reading this! Sounds will result to beging! Please write more! Please! It's so beautiful that it leaves me breathless! I can say unwillingness not be able to sleep soon not knowing what will happen! Please please? I know you must be busy and have a life but please? It's such a pity to leave this unfinished! Thx for your attention! Wishing you good luck! Take care!
I remember reading this story a while ago, and now reading it again I was reminded of how good it was. And, actually, it makes perfect sense. I can't wait to read the third chapter. You've done a good job!
BluMystique (Chapter 2) - Fri 08 May 2009
2 Chapters in and I'm already hooked. Eagerly awaiting the next one :D
| It's just as I expected. This fic is a very well written expansion of your poem. You do a great job at describing and playing with their emotions. I hope you continue quickly!
darkmiko89 (Chapter 1) - Sun 11 Jan 2009
im sorry but im sooooooooooo totaly confused. im usualy good at understanding things
but this just warped my brain and made my mind literaly scream "WHAT????". i really am
sorry but this stroy just does not make sence. Sorry. Theres no back ground to explain
what your talking about and every thing just seems mushed together.sorry if this seems
rude but it is true.
Mica (Chapter 1) - Sun 11 Jan 2009
I really love it....and when i reached the end and found that there was no second chapter...I couldn't help but say that it wasn't fair!
Please, please finish this story someday soon. I can't wait to read it.
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