I am MORTIFIED to find that I've never written a single review for any of your wonderful stories... forgive me? Seriously, I am sooooo embarrassed!! Anyway, to rectify that ungodly oversight on my part... a proper review of this DELICIOUS tale! I love the premise of the story, and - YES - you carried off your original intent perfectly! It fit as a canon one-shot, and was even more enjoyable as you added to it. To capture so much action and tell the reader so much in so short a story is truly an art form. Then, there are those lovely, lovely lemons... oh, my, yes. Ever-so-yummy citrus, and so convincingly done! Once more, I am truly horrified at my failing, and wish to thank you SO VERY, VERY much for all the excellent effort you put into each of your well-crafted, entertaining stories! :-) ~~Wiccan~~
wawa (Chapter 4) - Mon 09 Feb 2009
| I love your stories. I am a bit sad this one ended though. The smut was very good. Oh well at least I still have Remnants of the Spider to read.
Katie (Chapter 4) - Sun 08 Feb 2009
I enjoyed it. I envy your long chapter writing ability. It was a nice lemon with just the right amount of plot for when your in the mood for something light and enjoyable.
Wow, so much in just four chapters, and such a satisfying, happy ending, too! I absolutely loved it. Yay!
Awesome! I love this!
I like the plot, too.
This is hott...
| Hot and sweet at the same time. I liked it.
Saholia (Chapter 4) - Sun 08 Feb 2009
I said it once, and I'll say it again: THIS WAS AWESOME!! I'm still not over my amazement that you fit such a fulfilling story in just four chapters! lol
I hope you decide to write more stories like this--you've got a real talent for it--specially lemons! xD
DazRose (Chapter 3) - Sat 31 Jan 2009
| Greetings
I have enjoyed your story very much Good shess/Kags fanfics are indeed very hard to find You make this one not only sexy but very plausable at the same time I can see the resevered Sesshomaru handleing his love life like this And haveing a history (even if in the anime) is slight with Kagoma This could really concidered one of the stories in the way You've set it up Anyways pls try to contuine this story I would very much like to see more of your writeings
Best wishes
Dazrose
wawa (Chapter 3) - Wed 28 Jan 2009
| Nice chapter! How could you end it there!!!! I was looking forward to Naraku getting his butt kicked and then WHAM you ended it! I also feel if I put enough exclamation points in this review that maybe -just maybe- you will post the next chapter a bit faster!!!! See you next time!!!!
Saholia (Chapter 3) - Tue 27 Jan 2009
You are the biggest tease EVERY!! How could you leave it there?!?!?!?! Please update when you can, but know every day you don't I loose a night of sleep--and rest--thinking about the possibilities....xD
Noacat (Chapter 3) - Mon 26 Jan 2009
YESH! *drools*
| I Love it!!!
*inner self running around in mind screamiong* more mnore more more more.....I want more now.....oooooo candy.....
it was awesome and arent you glad my inner self is easilly distrated.. ooo shiny.
Saholia (Chapter 2) - Thu 22 Jan 2009
I am so glad you've decided to turn this into a full short story. This chapter was amazing and I can't wait for more. Like the first it left me craving more! lol. Great job!! :)
| Wow..steamy chapy!Love it!
I can't wait for the next chapy! =^.^=
wawa (Chapter 2) - Sun 18 Jan 2009
| Yes, a new story! A very well written, intresting, and steamy story! I agree with redpixie, the line with Miroku, Sango, and Shippo was very amusing! See you next time!
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