| you should turn this one into a story
Sesshys_Honey (Chapter 2) - Wed 07 Jan 2009
| Hey KB between the line was a great one-shot. I really don't care for angust, but i think it would be great if you turn this one-shot into a story. it could start out that kagome and kagura are both pregnant, but sess. is married to Kagura. Kagome decides not to tell sess. cause shes a little bitter at him cheating and leaveing her. 9 months latter the babies are born adn something happens to kaguras baby that makes sess. relive that its not his.
1. the baby needs a blood tranfusion(sp?)
2. the baby looks nothing like sess. or kagura so sess. has the babby tested.
After all that drama is done and sess. leaves Kagura who he really didn't like personality wise (lets say shes a gold-digger or something like that) he starts to feel guilty about kagome and the way he treated her. So some how he comes in contact with Kagome and sees her with a child and a very handsome man (lets say hes a good friend that just happens to be in town and need a place to stay, or a relative thats staying over.)
to say that hes pissed is an undestatment so when he gose somewhere and calms down. He thinks over something then he decides to go over and confront kagome
about the baby and the man he assumes that she is involved with. When he confronts Kagome she tells him off and he sees the young man holding the baby (which i think whould be a girl) and storms off. some way some how he should figure out that its his child or mabey kagome would tell him since she still loves him. Even though she begged him not to go kagome shouldn't be a weepy doormat and sess. should go through so deep though processes and work on his terrible attitude.
I think tht this wwould be a grat fanfic for an author of your talents to write.
Hopefully youll consider it or maybe hand it over to another athor that might be interestead. Its hard to believe that i got inspired by one amazing fanfic.(yes im kissing ass but its all true)
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