One extremely frustrated aristocratic assassin youkai slowly evolves into one delighted youkai with a toy. Clever, but scary.
LC Rose (Chapter 4) - Wed 28 Jan 2009
| LC is ready to know the why! And I absolutely loved the bit about Sesshoumaru seeing her as a toy. hehehehhee
LC Rose (Chapter 3) - Wed 28 Jan 2009
| I was going to wait until I'd caught up with the story to comment, but this line: "It was unlikely, but it was equally unlikely that his half-brother and the miko came here just to stand at the bottom of an empty well for fun. Even Inuyasha was not that inane." had me cracking up. Just had to say something!
kedala (Chapter 4) - Tue 27 Jan 2009
| I typically enjoy your stories, and this one is no expectation. This last chapter really intrigued me, particularly due to the fact that although you stated previously about this being a rehashed idea done many times before, you have been able to add a new depth and make it uniquely your own. The whole cat and mouse concept, Sesshy unable to rid himself of her in his dreams so instead decides to use her as battle practice (my words lol), or in your words, a toy. As usual, you do a great Sesshomaru. Looking forward to more.
| Gah! That was crazy. omg. i can't wait to see what happens next. is kagome sliced? does she wake up? will they both realize their sharing this dream? can't wait!
Oh man, what a place to end the chapter. If you die in your dreams do you die in truth?
Katie (Chapter 3) - Wed 21 Jan 2009
as always, concrit is greatly appreciated. If you noticed anything in particular that you really liked or dislike, please feel free to point it out!
Cliff hangers are cruel.
Its a great start you have going here. I cant wait to see where you take it.
| Omg how could you stop it right there *cry* I wanna know what happens!! Is she gonna be dead in real life too or did he stop at the last second... I cant wait until you update!!
Curious beginning. Curse or coincidence? Outside influence or power of the mind?
| >,< Can't wait to see what happens, or if they have that dream again!
Drianax (Chapter 2) - Tue 13 Jan 2009
| Good story so far! I like the B5 quote, but given where the quote comes from ("Confessions and Lamentations" and is actually "All life is transitory...an illusion. We all come. . .") it does not bode well for everyone if the quote is intended to foreshadow what will happen. If it's just there to be cool, good job -- it's a cool quote! Okay. Enogh B5. I really like the visuals that you have instilled in the dreams in chapter one, and the way you are shaping the relationships between the various peoples in chapter two. Cannot wait for chapter three! Update soon!
Oh men. Leave it to them to get jealous over another guy appearing in thier girl's dreams. Hahaha!
| Wow! This is a swesome start. I can't wait to read the next chapter. XD
Kojishi (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Jan 2009
Kay, it's official. I'm hooked on every single one of your stories. I'm dying to see what happens next!
Oh, I love this!
LC Rose (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Jan 2009
| So far, so good, hon! I look forward to more of this as I do everything you write!
Yay! You're the right person to breathe life into the "shared dreams" fic. Make this Forty proud!!!! XD
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