It is so true how dads can feel left out and just want to jump in there with their boys and do the silliest things, lol. 

That was very cute "I wonder what fire tastes like" haha.

hahaha!  Oh my!  I can just imagine WHAT was going on in that room!  I see some serious redecorating in the IMMEDIATE future!

LOLOLOL!  I DO NOT want to know what Inuyasha was doing with the comforter or all the feathers!  I don't even want to know if he was alone or not!  This is priceless, and poor Rin is scarred for life... Karma for feathers!  Nicely done!

This was so cute i love it. Too funny and great. Wonderful challenge fic! I encourage you to write more so i can read more! Great job!

I love it! And props for it being your first bit of writing since high-school. :D I love Rin's solution, and Sesshoumaru's confusion -- you've got characterisation spot-on. 

Thanks for sharing! A great challenge response. 

This was awesome!  Way too cute!  The characterizations were done so well, the dialogue was right on... all in all, very nice!  I will be sure to give you two Karma points, one for the rooster, one for landing on 500 words! 

thats cute!