You know i passed by this a few times and decided to read it right now. i liked it very much. Your idea is very interesting and i like your characters interaction. I think you did very well. There are a few grammar and spelling errors but nothing big and can easily be fixed by a read through or a beta. I really want to know what happens! So keep writing and ill keep reading!
Crimson Rose (Chapter 3) - Sat 03 Jan 2009
Can't wait for the next chapters!
darkmiko89 (Chapter 3) - Sat 03 Jan 2009
awwwwwwww its so cute i love it please continue it. and i love how you make kagome seem as if she is still a small child. it is very good. ^-^
| That was great! I really liked it! Continue continue!
Kagi-chan (Chapter 2) - Sat 03 Jan 2009
| That was nice. Inu is being mean. Bad Inu...Ha.
So Kagome is going to the West now?
I can't wait for more Sess/Kag interactions.
twiknham (Chapter 1) - Fri 02 Jan 2009
So far, so good! Looking forward to Chapter 3.
I personally am voting for Mukoutsu. He was very stifling and always talking about taking Kagome but never worked up the courage to actually do so. It'll be interesting to see who you envision!
-TK
| i really liked this chapter! i wont to know who the "Master" is Or was but i think i have a felling of who it was keep it up i like it so far!
Kagi-chan (Chapter 1) - Fri 02 Jan 2009
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