| wonderful first fic! Good job!I dont feel like parroting the other reviews, so I'm going to leave it there. LOL .. Maru
| *CRY* that is soo sad, i have tears in my eyes from reading it. that was a suprise when it read that sesshomaru was dead, *CRY* very good Smoke, just very sad.
LC Rose (Chapter 1) - Tue 30 Dec 2008
| Ah, that ending left me so sad! I was in a complete different mind mode, thinking one thing, and then you turned on me and gave me that! lol What a beautiful piece...
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Tue 30 Dec 2008
This was very good! You lead the reader along very well, and this had a nice flow to it. Your imagery was excellent and you were descriptive without it becoming heavy. Impressive for a first post! Karma for you for flaming confetti!
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