I guess I can confess now... I almost worship the keyboard you write with... lol
HOMG! *has a heart attack* Sesshoumaru... Too... Hot... Can't... Compute. ;)
Fantastic chapter, as always! I love his motivation for helping her -- it's exactly the way he would view things. And that last line of his was just perfect. I love how he melted the bat. :P
Beautiful writing, as always! And it's completely legit to make it up as you go -- works for me. ;) I dunno what I said that was inspiring, but I'm glad you ran with it because this chapter is fantastic! Can't wait to see what you come up with next. :D
| He melted the bat, HA!
I loved your imaginatin. I wonder if the officer is Kouga? Does Inuyasha know that Kagome knows about him cheating. I mean does he think their still together?
| That was down right funny. I could picture the officer and sesshoumaru's action's with kagome standing there slack jawed. I liked this one so much that I read it 3 times in a row. Saddly I must be insane because I laughed just as hard every time. I'm really injoying this story. I can't wait to see how inuyasha acts when they tell him they can't find who did it. I still wonder how he got home. I also wonder if Inuyasha thinks now that he can get kagome back or that she wants him back because in his mind what other reason could there be for her to be at his house. Well post soon. XP hugs and puppies
nice!! ree, you must make more! it is an order!
highly amused (Chapter 2) - Fri 02 Jan 2009
Your story is a cracker. great job keep it up
black moon inu (Chapter 2) - Fri 02 Jan 2009
| Oh oh oh me likey. that was so cute in the end it's their little secret. lol Inu doesn't know inu doesn't know so don't tell inu. I don't own that but still. Now my only thought is what car was inu in that he got home? hugs and puppies
Bad puppy, Baaad! -snicker-
Ah, I'm so glad you're tranforming this little one shot into a serial. I'm a sucker for serials, and knowing you, it's going to be a good story. XD
I hope you had a nice holiday :)
Dewa mata
| Roflmao! I mean Sesshyla excuse was classic! It was awesome!
| very nice very nice
Nefret (Chapter 2) - Fri 02 Jan 2009
Hahaha. I love your characterisation of Sesshoumaru. I wonder what he thinks is in all of this for him, though?
Might as well go big, or don't go at all. Nice done.
| I loved thud story especially when Sesshomaru walked in. It was hilarious. I'm hoping for sequel! Please!
Nefret (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Dec 2008
LOL. TEA. He invited her in for TEA. I love it when he's blasé. :)
| i live it I agree, do you think you could do another one shot for it like Kagome hanging with sesshomaru when inuyasha finds out
Jupe (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Dec 2008
...EEHEEHEE. This makes me giggle hysterically.
Kagome hiding the bat behind her back was priceless - and TEA. TEA. Sesshoumaru would TOTALLY invite her in for tea. Simply perfect. You get an A+++. xD
rj (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Dec 2008
| i like it lol
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