Surprising twist at the end, good job catching your readers off-guard. Doesn't mean I liked it, since the spell that canceled their bond placed his heart (love?) with another. So it wouldn't make a whole lot of sense for him to ever return to Kagome through a gradual, more logical/realistic relationship. Even though I didn't really enjoy where you took it at the end, the story itself was well-done and I offer my congrats on a nice job.
LC Rose (Chapter 4) - Fri 20 Mar 2009
| WHA?!?!? That damn well better not be the end there, girl. Or I'll be coming after you!!!
| story is awesome. enough said
| Ahhh...If only spells actually worked that way. Love the story though, especially Sess appearing in dog form first. I really liked how you entwined that in there.
Soo.... the end leads me to think she's accepted the idea and is going to have some fun with it? lol. cute.
LC Rose (Chapter 3) - Fri 30 Jan 2009
| Had to read this again from beginning to current just to remind myself WHY I was demanding an update for it. (not really, it's a great story!) And the LC was not dissatisfied in the least with it. And this third chapter was so awesome. I know I already told you on FF, but I loved how Sesshoumaru reacted to her "rejection" of him and the playfulness at the end. Run, KAGOME! RUN! (i'll take care of Fluffy for you) ;-)
LC Rose (Chapter 2) - Fri 09 Jan 2009
| Oh god, girl!! I've been so behind on my reading and my email deleted all the stories I hadn't read when the New Year came. Just had to get to this one, though, and boy was I glad I did. It was hilarious and exciting and I want more!
| Ok I really need you to update this one because it's driving me insane with the waiting and the wondering what will happen. Put me out of my misery I beg of you. -gets on hands and knees and gives the puppy eyes- you can not resist the look you must comply. Post soon.
hugs and puppies
Elenna (Chapter 2) - Sun 04 Jan 2009
| Oh come on! Don't stop there! XP I cannot wait for the next update! He he....I can't wait to see what Sesshomaru is thinking.....please update soon! I'm practically bouncing in my seat wanting to see what happens next!
piper (Chapter 2) - Wed 31 Dec 2008
| i love this story! please update soon!
| love this so far cannot wait to read more. do u have a mailing list? so i caould know when youve updated?
Sala (Chapter 2) - Mon 29 Dec 2008
Rrrr! Excellent fic. I sort of hope the rating goes up, but even if it doesn't, I hope you update with the next chapter soon!
| Oh!! I can't wait to read more of your amazing story!!!
Plz update soon!! =^.^=
Crimson Rose (Chapter 2) - Mon 29 Dec 2008
| That was so good! Can't wait for the next chapters! ;)
ooh.. what's going to happen next??
| Can't wait to see how this ends.
Ya!! *dances* Sesshomaru in his true form! Always a bonus! This is very cute and I want to see where you go with it! :D
Nefret (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Dec 2008
*squees in delight* FLUFFY-SAMA. Seriously, you just made my day. That was adorably cheesy (in such a good way), and definitely put a smile on my face.
Thanks for sharing!
I'm off to go find out if that spell works for me. ;)
Nefret.
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