MARU!!! I was just really getting into your story... except theres soemthing wrong with the end!! Fix it Maru! Fix it! -Ria

Maru...

Good job!  You're going to have to do more of these, this was very fun to read.

-TK

Very nice and good job for a first post!  You get a karma for the demise of the squirrel, that was my favorite part... ; )

AAAArgh! Beware of the rabid squirrel attack! lol Good little shot we have here, Sess is a little OOC but well... he couln't be too In-Character with a light tone one-shot, so it goes un-noticed. Ah, Kags, always wears her heart on her sleave. It'll be the death of her one day, hopefully there'll be a taiyoukai with a healing sword nearby if that day comes. ;)

I'm not really one for the first-person perspective, but well, that's me, and you write it well. ^_^

Good work Lad. :)

Dewa mata

lol. Run away, Rabid cute fluffy things on the loose!!! Very good job, I absolutely loved it. Please keep up the good work and post more when you get the chance.

too funny i love it. Good job!