Angelicatt (Chapter 1) - Sat 13 Mar 2010

short and sweet and quite to the point. Very nicely done.


Sessylove219 (Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Mar 2010

Short and sweet, I like it. Is this for a specific prompt? If so, please name it. I can't really think of anything else to say here, it is so short. Good luck.


Scherherazade (Chapter 1) - Thu 11 Mar 2010

A sweet well written little poem.


beckyducky (Chapter 1) - Wed 10 Mar 2010

This poem is short and sweet.  I do recommend going over it because I think there is a conflict of ideas when you say the narrator does not dare to say “I love you” but in the end says that he/she will.  Just a bit confusing but overall good.

ducky out.


Hairann (Chapter 1) - Tue 09 Mar 2010

I would suggest to drop the words in all caps and try not to captialize letters that shouldn't be, such as 'I Love You' should be 'I love you'.  Other than that, it's a nice, cute poem. 


Ikaru (Chapter 1) - Mon 08 Mar 2010

very nice little poem, short sweet and to the point, just like i like my poetry:D


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