this chapter made me leave this story... not the direction I expected,  disappointed   I wasn't expecting kagome to be raped, so soon too but I guess now  instead of later or I'll be wasting my time reading this.  best of luck.   

This story is beautifully written. My only wish is that he'd found s way for her to to live as long as him.

This is an awsome story i love it.

wow! great work done there, I really loved the story! and every chapter is like very eventful!, and I wanted to send a review for each! well anyways.. I can type it all breifly here...

so I thought that it was very thoughtful to make her have a boyfriend in the beginning unlike all traditional things.. you know?  I just wanna say how great that was. when she realized her feelings to him cuz she needed time and space to realize that.. and then experiencing the true love with Sesshoumaru. very nice.

the funniest thing is when Kagome mentioned to Inuyasha their 'attempt' at sex which ended up in watcing a movie. that was a laguh!

and Shippo had a very nice roll there! though I'm a fan of Sango but anyways, there had to be a bad bitch in every story, right? you made a great job in making the bad bitch's roll accurate :P lol

oh, what happened to Miroku? though I have a feeling on that matter...

okay guess that's it.. keep up your good work! wonderful (:

-Reema (;

I can't believe I missed the last update for this fic!!! Thank god I checked myself to see if there was anything new =)

Wonderful last chapter, and wonderful story ! I enjoyed it very much =)

Awh. I really liked it. It was...horrible in many different ways then "lord of the Flies", but at least it wasn't kids eating each other. *nods* Very well done and a unique idea. Love it! <3 -Love Akumi

I've gotta say that I absolutely love the way you started off this chapter. It gets you hooked and makes you want to keep reading. Your grammar and spelling are perfect too, I saw no errors needing to be corrected. Great job! I know I will enjoy this fanfic. :-D

This Hikari always loved a happy ending. This fic was good, from head to toe, and I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.

Although I know you must have tons of good plots dancing giddily into your brain, I'm always one to appreciate a good fic in the after-manga settings. There is never enough of these. Writing a Sess/Kag and staying this much in canon is so very challenging... I don't know if you would be thrilled with such, as you seem to thrive with AU fics... but well, you asked for -our- opninion... -wink-

Whatever you choose to write after this, I'll probably love anyway. XD

Dewa mata

Oh, for pity's sake... you're trying to KILL me, aren't you???  AARRGGHHH!!!!  Very effective plot device, though, and masterfully done - the ubiquitous cliffhanger!  I loved the opening, when she slammed the door in InuYasha's face.  I'd sooo love to see a pic of THAT one, although, my imagination is pretty vivid.  I can almost see the anime steam coming out of those cute puppy ears!!  Congrats on another terrific chapter! :-) ~~Wiccan~~

Oh yay! Yaaaay! *dances with joy* Oh you make my heart happy! I absolutly adore your story! The end of this chapter makes me feel so light and giddy. Wonderful job!

I;m hesitant to read this story. Lord of the Flies was a very dark piece in my eyes and made me almost cry in class. haha So...I'm trusting you...just thought I'd share that with someone else......I swear to god...if anyone gets eaten....I'm going to die a little inside. i mean...didn't that part make anyone else cry!?!?! It was just so....*coughs* Anyways...

*Gurgle* The anticipation! It's killing me.
Well done, though at first I was confused with Kagome running around since having some major surgury done in the last couple chapters. Maybe you could give a little more of a solid time line for that? But otherwise wonderful. You wrote the excitment of the two so well now I'm all jittery. (^_^)

Oooohhhh, THANK YOU!!!  You have no idea how much I've enjoyed all the wonderful updates in the past couple of days... and the anticipation of what was going to happen once they were rescued... awesome!  Now, with this latest installment, you leave us with the anticipation of what's going to happen on their 'date.'  Plus, we still have the specter of InuYasha lurking in the background... a darkly wonderful way to heighten the experience!!  I'm loving where you're heading with this story and can hardly wait for more.  Okay, with all the chapters added these past few days, I guess I should calm down some.  After all, I'm sure you have an active life just like everyone else.  So, I'll resolve to wait as patiently as possible for the next exciting chapter.  Thank you so much for all the enjoyable reading thus far! :-)  ~~Wiccan~~