are the dragons going to try to resurect their leader with the soul collectors? anyways keep up the great work i hopr to read more soon ^_^

whoop whoop go shippo! just dont get hurt!

please update!!

First and foremost I want to say that I really like this story. One great thing about it is that is flows rather nicely and if there are any mistakes they are so small that it doesnt take away from the flow. I really want to see how the relationship between Sesshomaru and Kagome is going to develop that will be something lol. And I have a feeling that the bond is not going to be that easy to remove if it gets removed at all.

On another note I have to say that I like the new character you added into the mix. Takeshi, has something rather nasty up his sleeve and I cant wait to see what all he has planned. Its rather funny that any female would lay with Naraku and birth a child tho but that didnt go over too well lol. But anyways I think that you are going great with this story and I will be waiting for another update.

I couldn't sleep last night and found this and read it. I loved it. Hope to see more chapters soon. There seemed to be more spelling errors in the last chapter.

Really loved reading your story!! Interesting plot and terrific characterzations.

aaww this is an awesome story, maru sounds so cute yet sad :( poor kid.

please update!!

Awesome! Can't wait to read more!!!

Hmmm. There's potential here. Honestly, I think you could have good writing skills, your descriptions are nice and you just don't relate actions, you let us know about their inner workings, emotional state and such things.

However, I have to be honest, just for the sake of helping you improve. There are many mistakes, something you probably would be able to avoid by just taking more time to reread, or finding somebody to beta your chapters before posting them. Honestly, that would make reading your story so much more agreable to us...

Please, consider this review as constructive criticism. My only purpose is to help.

I look forward to your next chapter. I'm curious to know how all this is going to turn out...

Dewa mata