Dyeing is not the same as dying. Dyeing is what people tend to do to their hair, factories do to clothes, etc etc, while dying is something has perished or ceased to exist, and it's probably what you're looking for. But I see this alot among many stories, among a few dozen others. It seems like dokuga authors all misuse the same words. *shrugz* Other than that minor spelling mistake, it was an interesting read. It seems to follow the original beginning with some minor tweaking.
--Kaminoko (c)2011
jojo661538 (Chapter 3) - Mon 17 Jan 2011
you know even though its going to be an angst story i really do like it keep up the great work i hope you update soon ^_^
amy (Chapter 3) - Mon 10 Jan 2011
UPDATE SOON, I AM CURIOUS ABOUT WHAT HAPPENS!
Mandy (Chapter 1) - Tue 20 Oct 2009
keep it up
awwww man i'm lookiing forward to reading next chapter
Don't put in a Chapter 3 if there really isn't one! That's so mean! Well anyways hurry up and update. I'm really loving this story right now.
FatAssMike20 (Chapter 3) - Sun 20 Sep 2009
| Come on hurry up man! i have work coming out the yin yang from school and i still manage to read stories that have 20-30 chapters! so at least make one.I want to know what happens.
Ps. i love it so farso hurry up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Crises Core (Chapter 3) - Thu 14 May 2009
| Ill support you all the way girl WOOO
X3 XOXOXO
katie (Chapter 3) - Sun 26 Apr 2009
| wow i like it please keep going
| I love your story lol I really like how you have kagome. I can't wait to see what else you have up your sleaves for our lovely couple. I have to say that the tittle was wonderful it was the reason I read I didn't even bother to read the summery I figured with a tittle like that it had to be good and I was right. Yes Kagome is OCC like those others said but that's half the fun. I love stories that take bits and pieces of her and add in their own mix. If you want my honest to god oppion their jealous of what a great writer you are. SO keep it up and post soon PLEASE I WANT MORE!!!!!!!LOL
hugs and puppies
Anon (Chapter 3) - Sun 08 Feb 2009
I must agree with the other reviewers. Kagome is way too OOC and Mary Sue-ish in this fic. I felt like I was just reading a few lines and skipping the lyrics (which basically took up the majority of the chapter) in the first chapter. Then again, I hate sonfics in general, it just seems like it takes up space in the actual story. The POV jumping around doesn't make the read smooth at all. It shows a lack of talent if you can't stay in one character's point of view. Either pick Kagome, Sesshomaru, or third person, just don't pick all three.
Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Sun 08 Feb 2009
i think this could be much better if you picked one POV instead of jumping around so much
Sala (Chapter 2) - Sat 07 Feb 2009
Mary-Sue much? Kagome is so far out of character that I don't even know what to say.
| Nice start to this story...just too short. Please update soon and often.
I am intrigued.
*hugs and smiles*
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