i do not hink the chapters are boring but i had hoped to read the full story

Dyeing is not the same as dying.  Dyeing is what people tend to do to their hair, factories do to clothes, etc etc, while dying is something has perished or ceased to exist, and it's probably what you're looking for.  But I see this alot among many stories, among a few dozen others. It seems like dokuga authors all misuse the same words. *shrugz* Other than that minor spelling mistake, it was an interesting read. It seems to follow the original beginning with some minor tweaking. 

--Kaminoko (c)2011

you know even though its going to be an angst story i really do like it keep up the great work i hope you update soon ^_^

UPDATE SOON, I AM  CURIOUS ABOUT WHAT HAPPENS!

keep it up

awwww man i'm lookiing forward to reading next chapter

Don't put in a Chapter 3 if there really isn't one! That's so mean! Well anyways hurry up and update. I'm really loving this story right now.

I must agree with the other reviewers.  Kagome is way too OOC and Mary Sue-ish in this fic.  I felt like I was just reading a few lines and skipping the lyrics (which basically took up the majority of the chapter) in the first chapter.  Then again, I hate sonfics in general, it just seems like it takes up space in the actual story.  The POV jumping around doesn't make the read smooth at all.  It shows a lack of talent if you can't stay in one character's point of view.  Either pick Kagome, Sesshomaru, or third person, just don't pick all three.

i think this could be much better if you picked one POV instead of jumping around so much

Mary-Sue much?  Kagome is so far out of character that I don't even know what to say.