Hahaha OH MY this is one of the funniest stories I have read in goodness knows how long! I like the way you managed to make it funny and at the same time, sexy (the hair washing part). I'd love to wash Sesshoumaru's hair too! LOL. Please continue writing:)

This made me laugh. =D

I think my favourite part was the peanutbutter, but only because it's my favourite thing to put on bread. Or anything bread-related. Sometimes I eat my peanutbutter straight from the jar with a fork. It amuses me.
Anyways, I really liked this. It was sweet. Good job, I can't wait to read more.

We are always our own worst critic (this I know from experience) and there is always room for improvement--even by the vets of writing (I'm not one of those). I found this two piece of be wonderfully done. It flowed well and the interaction was simply said but easily pictured. For me, I find enjoyment in something that brings a smile to my face and I can picture happening in my mind. People chewing gum loudly I can see bothering our inuyoukai with his sensitive hearing and is totally plausible. The interaction between he and Rin was so cute, too. And I liked the fact that Inuyasha spit his gum in Seshsoumaru's (ouch!) hair. Last line of defense and all.