Just one or two spelling errors/mix ups. Near the bottom though;

["How come there are pocky boxes here."

uh oh, Shippou thought. I'm in trouble now.

Um..well you see i got hungry and...." He stopped mid-sentence and Kagome turned around and daw him giving her the puppy dog eyes.]

Hnm.... there is a lot that you can do with this.

["How come there are pocky boxes here?"

'uh oh, I'm in trouble now.' Shippo fidgeted. "Um... well, you see I got hungry and..." He stopped mid sentence and Kagome turned around and [...I have no idea what you wish to put here but "daw him" didn't make any sense. You could put " Kagome turned around with a scolding look. He stared back at her. His eyes widder with the sad puppy dog look causing her ire to melt.

She just couldn't help it when he did that. She sighed, "Your forgiven, but no more sweets till I say so. Got it?"

He relaxed. "Okay!"]]

lol That was just one version. Well, onward! The sweets were cute and the chapters are short, kind of like a oneshot collections.

I wish you luck on your mid term! ^-^

Oops... before I forget. At the end of the flash back for;

[Kagome sighed why she was even thinking about almost a week had passed since it happened. Besides she had better things to think about than Sesshomaru...okay who was she kidding the guy looked like a sex god!!]

You could have put it like,

[Kagome sighed, 'Why was she even thinking about that?' it had happened almost a week ago."]

Or,

[Kagome sighed, 'Why was she even thinking about that?' almost a week had passed since it happened(or you would write occured)]

I guess that's just edditing. -shrugs- Now to get to the next chapter...

I think running to him seems a bit too... eager. -chuckles and shakes head- and the "like a sex god" comment is made by an obvious fan.

Well, anyway, I curious how this plot is going out.

Eepp I can't wait for the next chapy!!!! Update soon okay!

EEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP this is so good please update soon