Again, ethereal. I really don't know what else to say! Every chapter shines.

Oh.  My.  GAWD.  This is so hauntingly, heartbreakingly BEAUTIFUL!!!  I can hardly wait for the last two "chapters;" it is THAT captivating.  I shouldn't still be awake at this hour, but I just HAD to read this - frankly, I was going to wait until it was done, but I couldn't.  You are DAMN good, did you know that??  DAMN GOOD!!!!  I can hardly wait to see what you come up with for the last two although, judging from what I've already read, I KNOW they'll be fantastic.  My mind runs through all the superlatives in my vocabulary, but they seem to pale in comparison to the feelings evoked.  KUDOS, m'dear!!  And thank you for sharing the goodness with us all!!!  :D  ~~me~~

You know... I just don't have much to say.

When a good writer uses words, he can transform them into images and emotions, and sometimes, only sometimes, those words can transform into tears.

This is kind of like magic, I mean, how come someone can change some clusters of black pixels into something so touching that one could cry over it?

But well, you've done it. Your words overwhelmed me and I cried. I still do.

A parent should never survive it's child.

Thank you.

Dewa mata

Please allow me a moment of blubbering....15 seconds...alright. I swear to all that is holy, you plucked the scene of Sesshoumaru discovering the DVD right out of my head. It moved precisely how I pictured it, right down to the alcohol and kneeling in front of the TV. But the blanket...the blanket...it was the perfect touch. Utter magic. And the addendum with Inuyasha and Kagome wasn't too shabby, either. Oh, who am I kidding? It was icing on the cake, a nice layer of foreshadowing with just a sprinkle of heartwarming fluff. I appreciate that you don't resort to making Inuyasha, or anyone, the bad guy. This story is so much more than that, and its realism makes it that much more romantic. Again, absolutely beautiful!!!

I love this story so far.  The characterizations are perfect, the pace of the action is great, the tone is just right for the emotion of it all, and it's not too wordy or too sparse.  You've done a fantastic job.  I especially liked the line about Kagome and Rin being the moon to Sesshoumaru's soul.  Very poetic, great way to get the idea across.  The chapters are a little shorter than I expected, but that's okay because they're not fillers, something always happens and you've updated so quickly!

awe i cant help but want more. update -pouts-