Great chapter. The Rin/Kohaku romance is cute, and Inuyasha seems butthurt as usual. Looking forward to more!
SQUEE!!!!!!!!!!! I am so VERY glad to see you posting here! WELCOME!! I'm sure you're gonna love it... lots of terrific readers and writers on this site, that's for sure! As I said in my review on that other site, I will be somewhat eagerly awaiting updates, and hoping that your muse doesn't desert you anytime soon!! Again, this story still has ALL the elements that drew me in when I first found it on A-Single-Spark, and the quality just keeps coming. HUGE, delicious chapters; enough twists and turns for a whole mountainside; enough ups and downs for a roller coaster... all rolled into a fic that has top-notch spelling, grammar, AND characterization. Whew - you ROCK! :D ~~Wiccan~~
Haha! Sesshoumaru is ticklish! I really enjoyed the domesticness of the end of this chapter. I'm on the edge of my seat to find out what happens between Kagome, Sesshoumaru, and Inuyasha and the others when they finally run into each other again. I'm also really glad that you didn't go for the whole -Sesshoumaru-remembers-everything-suddenly-and-ditches-Kagome-in-hatred- thing. I was worried you'd step right into that, but I think you're taking a far more interesting and realistic route with his regaining of memory. I'm sure there will be inner conflict and such, but I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
malini (Chapter 4) - Fri 12 Dec 2008
just wanted to tell you that this story is absolutely amazing. beautiful n well thought out. when do u update, please do so soon!
I've really enjoyed this so far. I'm really interested to see what happens if/when Sesshoumaru remembers himself. Please write more soon.
Bella (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Dec 2008
I love the way you write. I can tell by the first chapter that this is going to be an interesting and enjoyable story. This is the first time I am at a loss to how the story my go...you are indeed a cleaver person and I can not wait to see where you take the story. Please update soon.
HI!! *^_^* I'm glad to see this on dokuga, I love your story!
Mikaela (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Dec 2008
=o I'm so glad to see you here! I've followed this story on FF.net, and I was hoping you'd come over to Dokuga! I'm glad to see you here, and once you catch up with the chapters here, I'll be sure to follow!
Good luck!
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