OMG I am so glad to have come across this story! I am so excited to read this. I LOVED THIS JUICY CHAPTER!!! Can't wait to see how Sess reacts when his memory comes back
bah!! I shall throw books pencils pens paper and anything else I can pick up and aim for your head!!! Dammit Sessomaru, just tell her you were a fool to banish her and an even bigger fool to not go after her.
Love the story by the way.
Late, keep it coming.
I really hope you come back and finish this story. It's incredible.
Great story, I hope you come back and update soon.
Siamesefish (Chapter 20) - Thu 23 Feb 2012
I hate how this story makes me feel. I now also resent every single character in this story. It takes a pretty special effort to turn your reader against every single good thing in the story. Sadly what often comes to pass in good stories is my eventual apathy, this has happened once again due completely to your cliffhangers and the complete absence (practically) of Sesshoumaru...you know, the reason I wanted to read this in the first place (or maybe it's been so long that you've actually forgotten). The fact that she is now barren also destroyed every essence of hope left in this story, she may love Sesshoumaru but I cannot believe that she will ever forget his cruelty - making any reunion essentially lackluster in my eyes. I can only think that 'love' is a concept Kagome would now quite happily never consider again and if i'm wrong I no longer care about her thoughts and motivations anyway as this story has literally injured my spirit and unlike Kagome I know when to quit a bad thing. This suspence is not killing me and nothing happy or positive will occur due to subscription except possibly more soul crushing angst. There can be no 'happy' ending considering my complete unhappiness at everything that this story has become. Even if it were go well at best you could only garner bitter-sweet. You said it would be worth hanging in there with this story. Sadly you have only proven to me how untrue such words were. I regret giving up on this story if only for the knowledge of would it could have been.
Sorry & fairwell.
On the bright side it is perfectly suited as an angst story but this is definately not a romance.
Scarlet (Chapter 20) - Mon 04 Jul 2011
Please update soon! I can't wait to read more!
COAIM (Chapter 20) - Wed 01 Jun 2011
AMAZING!!!!!
First thing I'd like to say is 'Oh My Gawd'! I found your fic last night and couldn't stop reading until this morning. It's absolutely addicting. XD And I'm happy that you didn't make Inuyasha a jerk.
Kii kii (Chapter 13) - Fri 07 May 2010
i wish you didn't use my middle name on chapter 13.
kii kii (Chapter 1) - Fri 07 May 2010
are ya gonna start back up on this story it's been months since you updated.
jojo61538 (Chapter 20) - Thu 25 Feb 2010
oh come on sigh well its a great story keep up the great work ^_^
Cliff hanger RAWR
Wow, what a wonderfully angsty story! Of course, this latest cliffhanger has me riveted for the next installment.
Please update soon!
M'hael (Chapter 20) - Sun 21 Feb 2010
Wow, i really like this story. How it actually makes me remember why I detest honestly good hearted people that put other people ahead of themselves and the everything, like Dr. House said, "If you value other people above yourself, sign your donor card and jump into traffic" or w/e. By the way, I HATE YOU, horrible cliffy
O_O~!!!! ACK! >.< I gottta know what happens! Is she really dead or just really weak? I'm guessing the reunion is next but who will it go? Will the other people find out what kagome can do? (hope not) So many questions to that such an intense cliffy brought. >.< Gah need to know. *brain dies* Great chapter! I'm so happy you got to update and can't wait for the next chapter.
taixi (Chapter 18) - Sat 20 Feb 2010
poor inuyasha. he gave up so much for her (being hanyou, his time, and now his life...) Just curious, I see in your author's note you mention you modeled the criminal justice system in the story after the one where you live - I'm curious where that is/which system you based it on (I was jarred when reading the sentencing in your story, as it seemed pretty harsh the punishment dealt to the drivers. (And having the wife divorce the husband b/c his eye was wandering? wow, you are cruel!) In the US the truck driver could have been convicted of involuntary manslaughter but even he probably wouldn't have spent *too* many yrs in jail for that (unlikely to even be 10 yrs in most states, and likely to be only a few years, although granted it would depend on the state). )
WOW. Your story is really interesting.
Lia (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Feb 2010
Whoa! That's so different from fanfics I've read. I love the idea. It's unique I wonder how it'll turn out. Best of luck with the rest :D
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