Oooh I hate that bastard even more now. He should die by Ai or Sesshoumaru's hand. Preferably Ai. She deserves it after all this bs. I wonder if Sessypoo knows? He'd ream the dude out himself!
Holy fucking f-ing shit, cuss cuss, double cuss, censor me now. I've missed SO MUCH over xmas and new year's vaycay. And now, I'm so hellaciously tired I cannot attempt an accurate review right now. But rest assured it will be done soon. Sweet baby Jebus on a Christmas cracker. I mean, SOLID WHOA.
Okay, brief overview of WTFage:
Kohaku: Fatality. DID NOT see that KO coming EVAR (FALCON PAWNCH)
Ai: Trippy, Vulcan mind-meld future-vision Lost-esque time conundrum (epic WHOA...and major HMM on the Kagome resemblance)
Inutaisho: Galactic BASTARD. I mean, SOLID EVIL, makes Naraku look like Hello Kitty (which incites its own brand of fear, but I digress)
And between the family and friend visits, I alas haven't had time to work on my stories. That's what the weekend is for, writing, and REVIEWING. I mean, !@#!$ %$#$% @@#%$#. Seriously.
lillianruno (Chapter 56) - Sat 03 Jan 2009
this is a great plot line though the jumping back and forth in the time frame gets a bit confusing but all and all a great read hope to see more soon
Mmm... I would've taken the more 'air-headed' approach about the orb. Something like "it's soo pretty! Can you get me a sword with an orb like that?" or "Can i touch it? it's shiny..." lol.
So... InuPapa is maybe thinking about bringing Kohaku back? Hmm... *brings out shotgun then whistles loudly, smiling as the entire US military appears* I don't really think it would be worth it, dear. lol
Hmmm... I think I feel more pity than anything else for poor Kohaku. But is he really going to rest in peace? I know of several people who never leave the dead where they belong...
Jakotsu is really and attaching character. I hope he won't betray her trust...
Anyway, thank you for the wonderful chapters XD
Dewa mata
taixi (Chapter 52) - Mon 29 Dec 2008
oh, I'm so sad you killed off Kohaku. He had such a rough life, like Shippo said. And he had no one to love him. :( Hopefully he and Sango will be reunited in the afterlife (or...in this life? perhaps he too will be revived)
o.o damn. i feel bad for kohaku... (i almost always root for the underdog) i mean, he had such a screwed up life before and the one day he didn't take his tea so he'd be alert to help Kagome if she needed it, it ended up killing him. It's rather tragic, honestly...
if i were kagome, i'd say "hell to the no! You get me better then get your ass outta here! you went off after some brat that took my husband from me, is trying to take my soul and now is taking you! So I don't care what you want to be, all I know is what you *are* being and that's an ass!" eh... something like that anyway. lol.
Mm... any relation between SessMama (currently naimed Aiko) and Jak's sister? Hmm... or just a wierd fluke? I mean... sure, they found the body. But look what happend to kikyou!
Thanks for posting such a grand story!
i love jaks role in Kags life now!!!! omg someone's gunna die a horrible death for messing with his baby sister!!! hahahaha i love it!
thats so sad but i love that! omg Sess is gunna have one hell of a watch dog for Kags now if Jak wants to be her big brother, i feel bad for anyone that goes agsainst her now. LOVE THIS!!!!
Will Jak accept her as his sister? When will Sess return? Can't wait for the next chapter!
Terenity (Chapter 1) - Sun 28 Dec 2008
I just wanted to say I love your story and Jak is sooo sweet!
0o0o0o0o... there you go with that updating thing again. You're making us other writers look bad, I'm telling ya!
Please, pretty pretty please keep making us look bad. It hurts so good!
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