It was slightly ooc with how sesshomaru killed her travelling party infront of her only to make a deal with kagome. Your writing and plot execution improved rapidly after shippo dies for real. I enjoyed the last 10 chapters despite the fact that kagomes chacter development was off. I hope u continue writing . A lot of potential here.

Free my girl ???? When Kagome has been subjected consistently to such extreme stress from the very day Sesshoumaru ripped her away from her loved ones, it's a miracle that she conceived, let alone that her body hasn't aborted the fetus yet from her pain and horror. I'm still not sure if she could carry to term though, and maybe that's a good thing. Apart from Rin (the little sociopathic child who doesn't care for anyone else's grief and pain as long as her lord is happy), ain't nobody deserves a horrible scum like Sesshoumaru for a father ???? 

god sesshoumaru is such an evil fuck. mysogynistic and gross down to his core, who killed her friends and now kagome has to watch naraku puppet their remains one by one and spew hatred in front of her. it's a miracle kagome hasn't lost her mind from this torture, but maybe a part of her is holding out for the opportunity to purge these monsters. i definitely won't feel sorry if she blasts this whole shiro to dust. 

i'm rooting for her to keep the baby and get her revenge against sesshoumaru at the same time. he can find his heir in hell.

Me encanta tanto tus fics, tienes una manera única de escribir, por favor nunca te detengas, gracias 

Man, Sesshoumaru's audacity. The true monster who killed her child and replaced it with his own here isn't Naraku but him, but he has the nerve to pretend to be gracious. I really hope Kagome gets her opportunity and kills both Naraku and Sesshoumaru in the end, in one fell swoop.

I really like this story but kagome seems to have no fight in her. She just saw her friends and kit get killed and seems to be civil with sesshoumaru, she doesn't even try to attack him. Sure, she can be in denial. But she just lost shippo again. She can threaten to purify his seed before his child develops if he doesn't fix what he started.. Just feel like she's very submissive. Can't wait to read more tho! Thank you for your time in writing this for us viewers.