This story is fantastic. You're writing is on parr with many authors of novel's I've read. Good novels :3
Please continue the story, I love it. The way you write is so fun to read, the beginnings of the chapters make me feel like it's an old legend being told, or at least that it is a story being told by an old person, right before I lose myself in it again. ;3 I wonder when she'll ask Sessh to take her to see her family. IF she does...I'm kind of doubting it more. Please don't leave it here or quit writing, it's so good!
Until next time,
Rex
Lumiere (Chapter 5) - Tue 28 Apr 2009
i so adore your stile of writing!!! and evry part is so fild with emotions...that it takes me in and it feels as if im in there living it with them....
so please have mercy on my trembeling hart and update as soon sa posible....please
i love all your stories
Lumiere
Jen (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 Mar 2009
Your way of telling a story inspires me to write. I suck at writing. Awesome story.
| I love this story! I like how you brought a twist to the storyline that any Inuyasha fan is familiar with. I love the romance you have between Sesshy and Kagome and hope to see more. I can't wait until your next chapter! This is one I am putting as one of favorite stories after this review. Please update soon and keep up the great work on this wonderful story!
Your Fan,
Sesshoumaru's Lady
Naraku with Sango seems to work. Rin fits in with Inuyasha and Miroku well and Sesshoumaru is going to take on the witch. I am curious to see if Kikyou will obtain a piece of Kagome's soul or did that already happen. I will have to re-read previous chapters.
Sumi (Chapter 5) - Wed 25 Feb 2009
I love how you twisted InuYasha series from the very beginning, it makes it feel...well hell, I feel like it's a ll surreal when I read a chapter. It puts me one of those 'what if this happened' kind of daze lol. Hope you continue with this story! I mean Naraku and Sango?! I'm pretty sure there are more fics out there with this pairing, but everything is so DISTORTED [which is a good thing] that don't know what's going to happen next. Rin w/ Miroku & InuYasha, Sango w/ Naraku, Shippou doing his thing, Kohaku tagged along with Kirara. I like how this is goin.
MLMonty (Chapter 4) - Sun 22 Feb 2009
It's such a pity you never finished this.
One year to clean house. All hell will probably break loose.
Touching interaction between Sesshoumaru and his Nanny. That was a very moving scene.
They deserved to lose their hair!
I like the twist. It should prove very entertaining.
youkailady (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Jan 2009
I love how you twisted the 'InuYasha' fairytale by having Kagome be Sesshoumaru's ward and Rin InuYasha's. It's been quite interesting seeing your version of how InuYasha little band together, even without Kagome there. I can't wait to see how your fic progresses! I glad you have now added your fic here but please don't just live it hanging in there without updates?   like you did at the other website (was it single spark? can't remember) please! Keep up the great work!  
Update soon!!
emmaren (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Jan 2009
| It took me a while to finish all four chapters (I don't know why I haven't read it before) but it was well worth the read. I enjoyed the slow developement between the main characters. And while I ache for some of the other characters and their predicament now, I love the fact that you went into depth developing the new relationships between them. Please continue this and all of your other great works.
| I know this story. You started in on ASS and stopped at the 5th chapter 12/07 and put it on hold. It was called 'Traversing the Ether of Dreams'. Every so often I've checked on this story and when ASS closed, I gave up on it. I found it here purely by accident since you renamed it. I hope this means you plan to continue this story.
too see it through newly appricietive eyes still makes me realize how much i love this story, as always you excel in making this r0o happy when reading your fiction.
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