Para serte sincera tu me sorprendiste gratamente porque creí que esto sería una especie de copia de "Sueño de una noche de verano" pero me equivoqué.
Me parece diferente e interesante.
Continúa la historia. Te está quedando hermosa.
En cuanto a Kikkyo no me parece mal que sea hermana menor de Kag ni que no sea una villana. Aunque mi personaje favorito era Kagome en el anime, tampoco pude odiar a Kikkyo ni verla como villana ( ese era el papel de Naraku ).
Pero si me gustaría que no sean completamente idénticas.
Me agrada muchísimo cuando se les distingue por el color de los ojos. Por ejemplo.
We got a glimpse of his scheming and goals in the previous chapter. I was not surprised lol. Hopefully he won't hurt our girl to get what he wants but I am all here for the drama, misunderstandings, & tension! So I'm excited to see how this turns out for them!
Oh I picture her more than freaking out lol
Ashleekyle (Chapter 1) - Fri 03 Feb 2023
Love love love it!!! Chapter 7 was amazing!!! Can not wait for the next update. I gotta say though I'm shocked kikyo is her sister I was expecting her to be her cousin. Also loved seeing it from sesshoumaru's pov. Nice touch. Can't wait to see how the wedding goes. I saw in chapter one you had said you wrote about this pairing before but I can not find it in that particular story is it posted somewhere else. Would love to read it.
Oh wow this was an eye opener for me.... Hitomi is none other than our Naraku in sheeps clothing. Brilliant really, who would have guessed what that sneaky snake is up too. So I take it Sesshomaru doesn't know Hitomi's end plan to use him to get to the jewel... Man I hope Sesshomaru and Inu Yasha keep their eyes and ears open for the attack I know will happen since Hitomi is already searching for the jewel. Can't wait until Kagome and Sesshomaru marry... Until next time.
I'm all for the somberness! It's a difficult situation.
This was a great chapter, Kagome and Sesshomaru soon to be married. Can't wait...
Oh man they both want to love but because of their pasts believe the other holds comtempt and soon they'll be wedded... I hope they learn to love each other and find the villan responsible for the killings.
Thank you for updating....
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