That was a wonderful chapter! Just enough crumudgeonly humor from Kaede to keep the desperate moment light. As usual, her old eyes miss little. I'm positive that Miroku is regularly the bane of her existence.
Thank you so much for the shoutout!
Man Kaede is one mean cookie..... err miko... I thought for sure she send them all away but Miroku got her to train Kagome so the evil doesn't spread and Sesshomaru will be patrolling ensuring Kagome is safe.
I'm really enjoying this fic. I don't mind the different POVs as long as they don't overlap and replay the story too much. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
Sunnie (Chapter 9) - Tue 24 Jan 2023
I love the different POV from each character, I feel as though it gives the story more depth. I've read quite a bit of Sess/Kag fics and I think the plot of this story is purely unique. With that said, I need more please! Can't wait for the next update!
Oh boy! Will her powers save her? I wonder if she needs a terrible event to cause them to protect her. Hope you are feeling better and Thank You for actually writing this while you were sick.
I love a leacherous Miroku. He's always trying for that threesome. Good thing Sango loves him or she might kill him. Nice chapter.
Really enjoying this story. Interesting.
Loved the chapter even if Miroku couldn't help Kagome he knew who would and I have to believe it is either Kikyo or Keade... Let's hope for Keade... LOL Anyways again great chapter can't wait to read more.
Amai (Chapter 8) - Sun 15 Jan 2023
There was something about the way this chapter was written that was different... I loved ittt
Man Kagome was lucky her powers saved her until Sesshomaru could arrive.... It was sweet when Kagome thought he was hurt making Sesshomaru fall just a bit more for his favorite student... Now comes the training wonder if Kagome will hate him.,.,,, lol Can't wait to read more.
Oh man to think Sango didn't know about Kagome was spectacular and the fierceness she had for Kagome and Sesshomaru was only concerned for her not realizing his feelings for Kagome would be more than a favorite student.... This was good, can't wait till Sango confesses to Kagome and they all learn the ins and outs about what they do....
Oh man this is getting good.... Wonder what will happen next...
Wait a minute....where's the next chapter button?
His POV really IS fun to write, isn't it? :D another great addition to an awesome fic.
Drum roll....do Kagome's powers come out to play? ????????
The tension is rising!!
Another awesome chapter!!
Wow, a new story love it can't wait to see what happens next...
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