| OMG! I love it! The brothers working together, Sessy taking walks with Kagome awesome. I love the battle it's very well written and not over written, since it's not the essential story, right? I can't wait to read what happens next. your awesome! Sessy is realizing during the battle he maybe in love. Is Kikyo in this? Does Inuyasha have more sence in your story when it comes to her? Well, I guess I shouldn't put him down for that, sometimes we can't help who we fall in love with. Your story is excellent, you should have no worries at all. I'm sticking with it to the end. Hey shame on you for such a cliffy! Hurry and update soon I can't wait to see how they handle this.Poor Kagome, but I trust her Inu's to rescue her in time. I'm biting my nails! Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel
| *Gasp* I can't believe you left it there!! Does she somehow manage to get out of the way? Please update again soon! Then bring forth the mushy stuff!!!(hehe)
Sala (Chapter 1) - Thu 26 Feb 2009
You should enlist the help of a beta. While engaging, your story needs grammatical help - you switch between tenses a lot.
| Keep up the good work! I cant wait until the story becomes more indepth!!
| Good way to end the chapter and keep people on edge! I really like it so far! Cant wait to read more!!:)
sunset in love (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Feb 2009
you did well, in fact if you keep up the fic, i'm sure to get addicted to you... update soon kay....
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Sun 23 Nov 2008
oh i did like it very much!! Im on the edge of my seat. I can wait to find out what happens! Great job!
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